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I Love Your Energy

We were neck to neck with ideas, Stanley and I. Incentives! We yelled, practically in unison. It was an all-day workshop, and I was completely enamored with him. He looks eighteen, but he might be twenty-three. At the end we had a shout out. I ran over to shout “I love your energy!” As I reached him, he shouted, “I love your energy!” Damn!

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Date: 8/12/2018 10:14:00 PM
I love your energy Caren, and I love your captivating poem. Your poetic story-telling is wonderful.. the spirit of your poem and its last line is awesome! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2018 11:33:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I was at a workshop on Friday, technically a day off, and I had the BEST time ever! This was part of it.

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