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I Love You Even In Far Off Place

I LOVE YOU EVEN IN FAR OFF PLACE

Fever of love cartwheel snaillike but where are you?

Round six o'clock noon, sunken is the moon gazing
behind deep orange-aubergine feather skies,
its shadowy light floods the shivering sea,
I, standing still amidst the tickling water,

my teary eyes softly wander upon endless horizon,
my hypothermic skin long for the kisses puffed by you.
Barefooted, I amble along the silky sands
seagulls fingers rushing to caress my feet but

droplets of August rain run fast above my head.
The crisp wind wafts whispering something in my ear
t'was the songs we sang second week of February
honeysuckle times gone but still my celcius sprint.

Softly, I tread back to memoirs playing a chemistry
where there catena  of  reactions  descry  revealing we...
Cleansed from river tears, blessed by suns of home,
my heart didn't surrender in wanting your presence soon.

Crossing limitless borders where our lamp is trust,
the choice to continue gleams in the name of freedom,
as we daily counteract two strategic villains:
the odd times and the eight thousand miles distance.

Yes, afar but this NOT THE BARRIER. Us baring our souls.
Us stepping onward, offering ourselves, to attain one goal.
I  listened close to your voice as we talk by phone
My oh my, your tone,  your giggle magnify my thoughts!

but   this  not  enough   'cause   I   yearn  to  hold  you  most.

I want to ask: what is it that's not in my heart
that fate acted so long in keeping us apart?
Perhaps... Ah perhaps! This must be for us 
to rightly spell the language of love...

The long distance vanguished, frozen fears diminished,
sapphire eyes cushioned by cherry color skin sings
as he stares whole from rosy chocolate coated cutis
to eyes touching tears, directly screaming: "I love you..."
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EPIC ---ONLY - Poetry Contest
Sponsor Name -- SKAT A
~7th Place~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
10:59am, July 24, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/4/2015 1:33:00 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Olive! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/20/2015 8:40:00 PM Thank you so much Dr. UPMA.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Kp Nunez Date: 8/3/2015 12:24:00 PM Back to congratulate you, Olive. HUgs! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/6/2015 7:50:00 AM hugs back Kim!! yey!

Afolabi Muideen Date: 8/3/2015 3:53:00 AM What a beautiful write, this write deserve what is takes, congratulations............A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/6/2015 7:50:00 AM thanks much Afolabi.. =')

Paul Callus Date: 8/3/2015 3:12:00 AM Hi Olive_eloi! Back with congratulations:) Hope life is still tinged with a rosy hue! Hugs ~~ paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/5/2015 2:16:00 AM Indeed, it is tinge with a rosy hues!!! hugs back! weeee~Olive

Skat A Date: 8/2/2015 11:54:00 PM Olive, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/5/2015 2:12:00 AM thanks much Skat.. =')~~~

James Fraser Date: 8/2/2015 11:46:00 AM Simply stunning Olive, now that August is upon us, little toes on Golden Sands are soon. So beautiful is the loving emotion within your words. Lets live them and be blessed with the sun on Palawan. Love this so much little one, and to my favs it goes. Mega hugs soon Olive, your Huge One//James xxxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/4/2015 1:26:00 AM Thank you so much James..=')! weeeeeeeeee yes so soon.. =')! Let's live!hugs back!~Olive Eloisa.. =')

Milton Robertson Date: 7/29/2015 6:41:00 AM Love is awesome, love is vast, a beautiful light on people lives love will cast and love is so sweet when love is true, because there's nothing worse than to love someone and the one don't love you. A Lovely Poem Olive. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/31/2015 8:31:00 PM Yes Milton love is sweet and beautiful in the light of persons who loves sincerely and truly... Thank you =')

Seren Roberts Date: 7/28/2015 12:21:00 PM Lovely read Olive, can hear the longing in your words.....Seren Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/30/2015 2:44:00 PM Yes Seren Im longing=')

Kp Nunez Date: 7/27/2015 10:22:00 AM This kind of passionate write can come only from the heart that truly loves and is also loved truly...There is such firm command in all the lines with a final powerful one. Way to go Olive! A 7 and hugs! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 10:37:00 AM Kim, yes.. =') you nailed it Kabayan! :D! thanks mumuuuch! :D!

Afolabi Muideen Date: 7/27/2015 12:57:00 AM What an intriguing piece , your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers. Love......7!.........A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 10:36:00 AM thanks much Afolabi.. :)!

Paul Callus Date: 7/26/2015 3:59:00 AM What a lovely and passionate expression of faith and love, Olive_eloi! This reminds me of my own love life, though the distance was not as much!! Love your sincerity, the imagery, the vocabulary and the quote in the accompanying visual. A 7rating and a fav for what it stands for!:)Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 10:33:00 AM Dearie Paul, you know me well.. =') thanks much always,. :D!

Justin Bordner Date: 7/25/2015 10:21:00 PM The freedom to trust love is the gift you share with each other, and the more wild and exquisite things in life that remind us of our true love affirms that love's truth, and it's need to survive beautiful moon walker...your imagrey is so intense and beautiful, "To eyes touching tears screaming directly, I love you..." such pure emotion of love...your use of rare language is the voice of the heart's expertise in feeling real passion Olive...J.A.B. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 10:29:00 AM this a based on true experience Justin.. =') and yes you nailed what I wanted to say.. !

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/25/2015 4:06:00 PM somehow, distance strengthens love... a true test of faith, eloi... so affectionately crafted from the heart.. YES, august it is, hmmm...what's the event?.. text you soon!.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 10:27:00 AM WEeeee it is just a get together of us Nette.. :D! I hope you can give me a date.. =')!!! thanks!!!

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/24/2015 4:08:00 PM Passionate work..I enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 10:22:00 AM Sara thanks and am glad you enjoyed my write,,.. :D!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/24/2015 4:05:00 PM You expressed this one with subtle and passionate brush strokes. This is a work of art. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/27/2015 6:14:00 AM Richard thank you so much for this wonderful inspiring comment.. :D!

Bl Devnath Date: 7/24/2015 3:37:00 PM For true lovers distance makes no difference. Beautifully expressed the love passion from true angle. A 7, loved always my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/27/2015 6:03:00 AM Bl this is based on true experience BL..=') thank you so much for your support.. =')

Harry Horsman Date: 7/24/2015 10:48:00 AM This should reach the far side of the universe, it is so good Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/27/2015 6:00:00 AM Harry thank you so much for the wonderful comment.. =')~Olive ELoisa..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/24/2015 3:05:00 AM Such a poetic marvel Olive,, great passionate write! Gl in contest dear! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/26/2015 7:38:00 PM Thank you so much Dr Upma.. I am just so inspired hence I made this poem.. =')

Tim Smith Date: 7/23/2015 11:31:00 PM So rich in imagery Olive and the last stanza is grand. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/26/2015 7:36:00 PM Tim as colorful as how love is this is how I want my interpretation of the theme is.. =')

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2015 11:07:00 PM oh my what a passionate and beautiful poem this is, Olive, It sings with imagery. The ending is so powerful! a SEven Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/26/2015 9:14:00 AM Andie.. thank you so much for your inspiring comment.. =')

Robert Lindley Date: 7/23/2015 10:47:00 PM Long distance relationships are hard but well worth it. My wife and I had our three year one before we met face to face and now we are married 11 years and ever so blissfully happy! Love how you crafted this deep poem. A pleasure to read my friend. A7 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/24/2015 4:01:00 AM ---but I met one already... and we are working on it.. =')~~Olive ELoisa :D! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/24/2015 4:00:00 AM Robert, most of the relationships I've been is of long distance once... I am not proud that they failed however I learned so much from them and without them ending maybe maybe I will never meet someone more special--someone God reserved for me... I am happy to hear you happy... stay blessed!!~Olive Eloisa thanks! :)