Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Epic

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~~~I always believe in love despite so many heartaches I've been through. I stand still not to stop loving but nonetheless to live more in loving..................... ~Olive Eloisa wanting to eat some cherry tops..! :D! Smiles!! :P 

I Love You Even In Far Off Place

I LOVE YOU EVEN IN FAR OFF PLACE

Fever of love cartwheel snaillike but where are you?

Round six o'clock noon, sunken is the moon gazing
behind deep orange-aubergine feather skies,
its shadowy light floods the shivering sea,
I, standing still amidst the tickling water,

my teary eyes softly wander upon endless horizon,
my hypothermic skin long for the kisses puffed by you.
Barefooted, I amble along the silky sands
seagulls fingers rushing to caress my feet but

droplets of August rain run fast above my head.
The crisp wind wafts whispering something in my ear
t'was the songs we sang second week of February
honeysuckle times gone but still my celcius sprint.

Softly, I tread back to memoirs playing a chemistry
where there catena  of  reactions  descry  revealing we...
Cleansed from river tears, blessed by suns of home,
my heart didn't surrender in wanting your presence soon.

Crossing limitless borders where our lamp is trust,
the choice to continue gleams in the name of freedom,
as we daily counteract two strategic villains:
the odd times and the eight thousand miles distance.

Yes, afar but this NOT THE BARRIER. Us baring our souls.
Us stepping onward, offering ourselves, to attain one goal.
I  listened close to your voice as we talk by phone
My oh my, your tone,  your giggle magnify my thoughts!

but   this  not  enough   'cause   I   yearn  to  hold  you  most.

I want to ask: what is it that's not in my heart
that fate acted so long in keeping us apart?
Perhaps... Ah perhaps! This must be for us 
to rightly spell the language of love...

The long distance vanguished, frozen fears diminished,
sapphire eyes cushioned by cherry color skin sings
as he stares whole from rosy chocolate coated cutis
to eyes touching tears, directly screaming: "I love you..."
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EPIC ---ONLY - Poetry Contest
Sponsor Name -- SKAT A
~7th Place~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
10:59am, July 24, 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2015 at 1:33 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Olive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 20, 2015 at 8:40 PM Thank you so much Dr. UPMA.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Kp Nunez August 3, 2015 at 12:24 PM Back to congratulate you, Olive. HUgs! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 6, 2015 at 7:50 AM hugs back Kim!! yey!

Afolabi Muideen August 3, 2015 at 3:53 AM What a beautiful write, this write deserve what is takes, congratulations............A.M. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 6, 2015 at 7:50 AM thanks much Afolabi.. =')

Paul Callus August 3, 2015 at 3:12 AM Hi Olive_eloi! Back with congratulations:) Hope life is still tinged with a rosy hue! Hugs ~~ paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 2:16 AM Indeed, it is tinge with a rosy hues!!! hugs back! weeee~Olive

Skat A August 2, 2015 at 11:54 PM Olive, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 2:12 AM thanks much Skat.. =')~~~

James Fraser August 2, 2015 at 11:46 AM Simply stunning Olive, now that August is upon us, little toes on Golden Sands are soon. So beautiful is the loving emotion within your words. Lets live them and be blessed with the sun on Palawan. Love this so much little one, and to my favs it goes. Mega hugs soon Olive, your Huge One//James xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 4, 2015 at 1:26 AM Thank you so much James..=')! weeeeeeeeee yes so soon.. =')! Let's live!hugs back!~Olive Eloisa.. =')

Milton Robertson July 29, 2015 at 6:41 AM Love is awesome, love is vast, a beautiful light on people lives love will cast and love is so sweet when love is true, because there's nothing worse than to love someone and the one don't love you. A Lovely Poem Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 31, 2015 at 8:31 PM Yes Milton love is sweet and beautiful in the light of persons who loves sincerely and truly... Thank you =')

Seren Roberts July 28, 2015 at 12:21 PM Lovely read Olive, can hear the longing in your words.....Seren Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 30, 2015 at 2:44 PM Yes Seren Im longing=')

Kp Nunez July 27, 2015 at 10:22 AM This kind of passionate write can come only from the heart that truly loves and is also loved truly...There is such firm command in all the lines with a final powerful one. Way to go Olive! A 7 and hugs! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 28, 2015 at 10:37 AM Kim, yes.. =') you nailed it Kabayan! :D! thanks mumuuuch! :D!

Afolabi Muideen July 27, 2015 at 12:57 AM What an intriguing piece , your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers. Love......7!.........A.M. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 28, 2015 at 10:36 AM thanks much Afolabi.. :)!

Paul Callus July 26, 2015 at 3:59 AM What a lovely and passionate expression of faith and love, Olive_eloi! This reminds me of my own love life, though the distance was not as much!! Love your sincerity, the imagery, the vocabulary and the quote in the accompanying visual. A 7rating and a fav for what it stands for!:)Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 28, 2015 at 10:33 AM Dearie Paul, you know me well.. =') thanks much always,. :D!

Justin Bordner July 25, 2015 at 10:21 PM The freedom to trust love is the gift you share with each other, and the more wild and exquisite things in life that remind us of our true love affirms that love's truth, and it's need to survive beautiful moon walker...your imagrey is so intense and beautiful, "To eyes touching tears screaming directly, I love you..." such pure emotion of love...your use of rare language is the voice of the heart's expertise in feeling real passion Olive...J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 28, 2015 at 10:29 AM this a based on true experience Justin.. =') and yes you nailed what I wanted to say.. !

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2015 at 4:06 PM somehow, distance strengthens love... a true test of faith, eloi... so affectionately crafted from the heart.. YES, august it is, hmmm...what's the event?.. text you soon!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 28, 2015 at 10:27 AM WEeeee it is just a get together of us Nette.. :D! I hope you can give me a date.. =')!!! thanks!!!

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2015 at 4:08 PM Passionate work..I enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 28, 2015 at 10:22 AM Sara thanks and am glad you enjoyed my write,,.. :D!

Richard Lamoureux July 24, 2015 at 4:05 PM You expressed this one with subtle and passionate brush strokes. This is a work of art. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 6:14 AM Richard thank you so much for this wonderful inspiring comment.. :D!

Bl Devnath July 24, 2015 at 3:37 PM For true lovers distance makes no difference. Beautifully expressed the love passion from true angle. A 7, loved always my lovely friend,bl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 6:03 AM Bl this is based on true experience BL..=') thank you so much for your support.. =')

Harry Horsman July 24, 2015 at 10:48 AM This should reach the far side of the universe, it is so good Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 6:00 AM Harry thank you so much for the wonderful comment.. =')~Olive ELoisa..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 24, 2015 at 3:05 AM Such a poetic marvel Olive,, great passionate write! Gl in contest dear! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 26, 2015 at 7:38 PM Thank you so much Dr Upma.. I am just so inspired hence I made this poem.. =')

Tim Smith July 23, 2015 at 11:31 PM So rich in imagery Olive and the last stanza is grand. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 26, 2015 at 7:36 PM Tim as colorful as how love is this is how I want my interpretation of the theme is.. =')

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2015 at 11:07 PM oh my what a passionate and beautiful poem this is, Olive, It sings with imagery. The ending is so powerful! a SEven Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM Andie.. thank you so much for your inspiring comment.. =')

Robert Lindley July 23, 2015 at 10:47 PM Long distance relationships are hard but well worth it. My wife and I had our three year one before we met face to face and now we are married 11 years and ever so blissfully happy! Love how you crafted this deep poem. A pleasure to read my friend. A7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 4:01 AM ---but I met one already... and we are working on it.. =')~~Olive ELoisa :D! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 4:00 AM Robert, most of the relationships I've been is of long distance once... I am not proud that they failed however I learned so much from them and without them ending maybe maybe I will never meet someone more special--someone God reserved for me... I am happy to hear you happy... stay blessed!!~Olive Eloisa thanks! :)