I Love You Elvis



Elvis Aaron Presley, Elvis, came from poor beginnings
born in Tupelo, Mississippi to Vernon and Gladys
this boy loved the gospel music in church . . . . 
at thirteen his family moved to Memphis, Tennessee 
when Elvis started school he was a loner and quiet
given a guitar on his birthday he learned to play it
and was taking it to school playing and singing . . . 
he was teased a lot and called, "a trashy kid
who plays Hillbilly music" . . . 
and bullied for being a mama's boy (well, that's true)
his music teacher said that he had no aptitude for singing
by junior year he stood out because of his good looks and style
he loved going to Beale Street the heart of Memphis's blues scene 
meeting BB King and others . . .
he made a few recordings paid for by his truck driving job
and was told to stick to driving a truck
was rejected over and over
remember this was the same man
who became The King of Rock and Roll

He recorded a song called 'That's All Right' 
that became an instant hit  . . . 
he was doing a show at the Louisiana Hayride Show
when Colonel Tom Parker took an interest in him
he saw that Elvis had something special
and he wanted part of that ( to control him) 
convincing his parents to sign a contract
that would sign away 50% of Elvis's earnings to Parker
Elvis recorded 'Heartbreak Hotel' that hit number 1 . . .    
there were television shows and tours followed by more
top charting hits and with his new wealth he bought a house
that would be known as Graceland . . .
he bought cars, things for his mother, father, family, friends

Some tried to change him but Elvis fought back
he went into military service, gosh he looked good in uniform . . . 
met Priscilla and fell in love but sadly while he was serving
his mother passed away (she was a heavy drinker) 
and Elvis was shattered . . . 
but Colonel Parker picked up the pieces
Elvis was doing a series of cheap movies and he was not happy
more tours, more television specials and interviews
it was endless . . .
he did a song called, 'If I Can Dream' (1969) 
Elvis Presley would say later
that it was the greatest thing he ever sang 
he sold 500 million records in his career  
and was declared the best selling music artist of all time
he tried to leave Parker's to get away from his control  . . .
but he could not do it because it would mean losing Graceland

Then, came the drugs ...

And the International Hotel in Vegas
a contact that Parker arranged
that was a prison to Elvis . . . 
his divorced caused him to spiral down (true he was having affairs)
his health was not good and Parker was pushing him
Elvis's look changed . . .
gone was the black leather and baggy suits 
replaced by gaudy costumes
his good looks faded . . . 
as he descended into this living hell
and as his health was failing the drugs took over
his last days were tragic to read about 
(was there no one who could reach out with a helping hand) 
he died of a heart attack full of prescription drugs
I wonder if he had never met Colonel Tom Parker 
who was not a Colonel but a fake and fraud . . . 
would his life have been different,
I can dream  . . .  
 
______________________
May 12, 2023


Poetry/Bio/I Love You Elvis
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1546-676-12
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written for the Premiere contest, Elvis Presley Inspiration
sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 05/13/2023

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/14/2023 2:41:00 PM
what a detailed descriptive poem Constance and such a sad end to an amazing superstar - Colonel Tom parker has so much to answer for over his demise:-( congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 2:52:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations on my bio, I did a lot of research to write this, it broke my heart that his amazing man had no one in the end to help him, yes Parker had a lot to answer for, I believe several years after Elvis's death there was a lawsuit for fraud and the family won, Parker ended his days gambling away his money, a sick pathetic man !
Date: 5/14/2023 11:20:00 AM
Good question you ask at the end. I think his success was spurred on by being in right place at right time with the colonel and sun records. So he may never have gained popularity and sadly, he had to endure everything that made him a star. Congrats on your bio write, Dear Heart.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 2:54:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and congrats, yes Parker helped Elvis in many ways but he controlled him too and pushed him beyond human limits, got him hooked on prescription drugs and locked into the International Hotel deal which Elvis hated, yes I can only dream of what could have been !
Date: 5/13/2023 4:17:00 PM
This is a favorite of mine!!! You write such a nice bio. The king will be missed.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 6:00:00 AM
Robert, thank you so much for the contest and my great placement. I like doing research, I like writing Bio's, so I love your contests. Thanks for the fav !
Date: 5/13/2023 12:51:00 PM
Not a single comment and I spent two days writing my poem, oh well, I love my poem on the life of Elvis , and I love Elvis Presley, there will never be another entertainer like him !
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 5:58:00 AM
Dilly, I could not add every single detail of Elvis's vast and complicated life or my bio would be a book. No compliment? No congratulations ? Nice !
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter