I Love You

oXo oXo X----O----X X----O----X o---My love--o o---I stay----o X---forever---X---so true---X o--I want you to know--o X----I love you----X o---eternally---o X--yours--X o---o X

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Katherine Stella

Date: 5/16/2010 6:58:00 AM

congrats raul on this being featured this would look great on a card for your sweety for valentines thasnks for sharing keep up the great work

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2010 5:50:00 PM

Congratulations! Raul, nice job on the pic. and form and being featured on the home page, have a nice one,..p.d..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2010 3:41:00 PM

Excellent design and write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Congratulations on being featured on home page today..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2010 6:25:00 AM

It is so wonderful to see this beautiful piece again! A treasure to view!

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/12/2010 6:33:00 PM

this is truly a wonderful piece of art going to my favs. great ideal. John Henry Loving III

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 5/12/2010 1:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write this week creative a work of art in words

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/12/2010 9:57:00 AM

Congrats Raul, on your concrete being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2010 2:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured write this week Raul. Love, Carol

Date: 5/11/2010 6:57:00 PM

This is such an artistic poem on multiple levels. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/11/2010 10:38:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/9/2010 7:46:00 PM

Congrats Raul on your featured poem this week on the Soup... excellent choice with artistic design to feature and share with us all..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jo Bien

Date: 5/9/2010 5:17:00 PM

beautiful! JB

James Fraser

Date: 5/9/2010 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Raul, simply beautiful >> James

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2009 4:32:00 PM

Thank you for the sweet heart! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/19/2009 6:26:00 PM

thankxxx Raul for bringing this to my attention.. I have corrected the error .. do u want me to resubmit to contest? by the way, your I Love You poem is unique and creative.. we all hope to find this kind of love some day ... Linda-Marie.