I Love You


oXo                  oXo
X----O----X       X----O----X
o---My love--o  o---I stay----o
X---forever---X---so true---X
o--I want you to know--o
X----I love you----X
o---eternally---o
X--yours--X
o---o
X

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Katherine Stella

May 16, 2010 at 6:58 AM

congrats raul on this being featured this would look great on a card for your sweety for valentines thasnks for sharing keep up the great work

Poet Destroyer A

May 15, 2010 at 5:50 PM

Congratulations! Raul, nice job on the pic. and form and being featured on the home page, have a nice one,..p.d..

Sara Kendrick

May 15, 2010 at 3:41 PM

Excellent design and write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Congratulations on being featured on home page today..Sara

Carrie Richards

May 15, 2010 at 6:25 AM

It is so wonderful to see this beautiful piece again! A treasure to view!

John Loving Iii

May 12, 2010 at 6:33 PM

this is truly a wonderful piece of art going to my favs. great ideal. John Henry Loving III

Nicole Sharon Brown

May 12, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Congratulations on your featured write this week creative a work of art in words

Vince Suzadail Jr.

May 12, 2010 at 9:57 AM

Congrats Raul, on your concrete being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 12, 2010 at 2:36 AM

Congratulations on your featured write this week Raul. Love, Carol

May 11, 2010 at 6:57 PM

This is such an artistic poem on multiple levels. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Janette Fisher

May 11, 2010 at 10:38 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 9, 2010 at 7:46 PM

Congrats Raul on your featured poem this week on the Soup... excellent choice with artistic design to feature and share with us all..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jo Bien

May 9, 2010 at 5:17 PM

beautiful! JB

James Fraser

May 9, 2010 at 2:28 PM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Raul, simply beautiful >> James

Debbie Guzzi

November 15, 2009 at 4:32 PM

Thank you for the sweet heart! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 19, 2009 at 6:26 PM

thankxxx Raul for bringing this to my attention.. I have corrected the error .. do u want me to resubmit to contest? by the way, your I Love You poem is unique and creative.. we all hope to find this kind of love some day ... Linda-Marie.