I Love You

What can I write, a mere mortal, to an angel?
What has not been written before 
more eloquently than I can ever dream?

Pen in hand, I glance at you over my glasses
Older now, as we are both, yet still, 
your beauty takes away my breath
and makes my heart beat faster than is safe.

You catch my stare and give a questioning smile.
That smile I saw all those years before in Nuremberg.
We both knew in that first moment 
that the answer would be yes.

"You know it's rude to stare," you softly say
I'm not staring, I think; I'm soaking, basking;
in everything you radiate.
I always have, and always will.

"What are you doing?" You question
"I'm trying to write you a love poem."
"What have you written so far?"
"Just the title, I love you."
"That will do!" You say.

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Date: 1/26/2022 11:24:00 PM
Now Terry that is absolutely beautiful and perfect for your lovely wife! How lucky is she having such loveliness written about her and for her! Deb x
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Date: 1/27/2022 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, Deb; it's always hard to write a love poem that does any justice; I appreciate your comments; stay well, Terry.
Date: 1/20/2022 3:32:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/27/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Beata. Love poems are difficult to write with feeling. I appreciate your comments; best, Terry.
Date: 1/19/2022 6:55:00 AM
Great love poem. Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/20/2022 2:36:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 1/19/2022 6:53:00 AM
Terry, your charming love poem made me smile because I can relate so well. Congratulations on your deserving podium win. I loved your wife’s reaction. Blessings xxoo
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/20/2022 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, for your kind comments; I am so glad that this little poem made you smile; that's what it is all about. Terry.
Date: 1/19/2022 3:58:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 1/20/2022 2:37:00 AM
Thank you, Gina, for the placement, kind comment, and for running the competition, love, Terry.
Date: 1/7/2022 4:44:00 PM
Yes, to say I Love you and know what that mean, is the most loving words you can say. Well written love poem Terry. Bill
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/10/2022 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Bill I appreciate your comments.
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