I Love You

I Love You As I look in your eyes, I cannot catch my breath It’s like my hearts been reborn and brought back from death This feeling I get is both blissful and surreal I am deeply in love, that is all I can feel When I’m lost in your eyes, I’m above every cloud I no longer see rain, with your love I’m endowed When I look at the stars or the moon you have hung I feel your beat in my heart, and your breath in each lung I’ll be a shield for your heart, I’ll absorb all your pain I will give you my life, so my deaths not in vain With you in my arms, I’ve learned the true meaning of life I will cherish each moment, with my beautiful wife 10-19-2021

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/28/2021 5:09:00 PM

What a wonderful and beautiful tribute to your wife. I am sure it was a treasure for her to receive. Congratulations on this lovely romantic poem being honored with POTW Mark. Blessings xxoo

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/29/2021 6:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie, I appreciate your kind words.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/26/2021 9:29:00 AM

How lovely Mark. There is no more beautiful gift than to cherish the love of your life. Congratulations. Blessings for both of you.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Sam

Debra L Brown

Date: 10/25/2021 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations! A heart felt Poem. Best Wishes, Debbie

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Debbie

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/25/2021 2:43:00 PM

Mark, congratulations on POTW with your beautifully romantic poem!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:45:00 AM

Thanks Tania, I appreciate that!

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 10/25/2021 12:33:00 PM

Simply Beautiful. Congratulations on your win Mark.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:44:00 AM

Thanks Natasha

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/25/2021 9:46:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on this win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed autumn day.....................

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:43:00 AM

Thank you Paula!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/25/2021 9:00:00 AM

Wow this is so beautiful... I wonder why it isn't on the top of the contest. Any way I can see it was POTD as well... Awesome... Congratulations

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:44:00 AM

How kind of you to say, thanks

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/25/2021 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. A "Beautiful/Wonderful" write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away.................

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:43:00 AM

Thank you so much

Constance La France

Date: 10/25/2021 8:50:00 AM

Mark, beautiful and congratulations on the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/26/2021 6:43:00 AM

Thanks Constance!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2021 7:51:00 AM

So touching. Congrats on POTW. Blessings Rick.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2021 7:51:00 AM

Thanks Richard

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/25/2021 12:01:00 AM

Wonderful couplets expressing deep love vividly. Congratulations!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2021 7:51:00 AM

Thanks

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/24/2021 11:19:00 PM

Congrats on POTW with this endearing write, Mark

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2021 7:51:00 AM

Thank you

John Watt

Date: 10/24/2021 10:28:00 PM

It does the heart good to see poets writing romantic and heartfelt love poems for their spouses. Well done Mark, and congrats for your POTW honor.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2021 7:51:00 AM

Thanks John

Karen Jones

Date: 10/24/2021 9:36:00 PM

Ah refreshingly romantic. Congrats on being featured as best.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2021 7:52:00 AM

Thanks Karen

Eve Roper

Date: 10/24/2021 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Mark, this was a beautiful romantic ,heartfelt poem. I see congratulations are also in order for POTW, very well deserved. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2021 7:52:00 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate your generous placement

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/24/2021 2:22:00 PM

Your poem is exquisitely romantic and beautiful Mark. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/24/2021 5:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Belle!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2021 11:01:00 AM

Hey Mark, many congrats on POTW very well deserved with this lovely romantic dedication:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/24/2021 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I appreciate that!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/24/2021 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations Mark on POTW, a well written declaration of love for your dear wife. Tom

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/24/2021 5:07:00 PM

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your kind words.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/24/2021 9:24:00 AM

Congrats Mark on poem of the week. Beautiful voice of love.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/24/2021 5:07:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/20/2021 6:44:00 AM

Mark, the genuine love you express is awesome! Absolutely beautiful! Blessings, Paulette

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2021 7:08:00 AM

Thank you Paulette!

John Lawless

Date: 10/20/2021 5:27:00 AM

Mark, you must definitely find a quiet moment in which to read this to your wife. She deserves to know and share your poetical, mushy side. Beautifully written.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2021 7:08:00 AM

I plan to when I get back home. Thanks