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I Love You

I love the fact your lunch is packed and hold a tear to calm your fear, as you act cool first day of school. I love your smile, it's been a while but I've seen it grow, bit by bit, and when you go I'll miss it so. I love the fall, you'll have a ball with your new friends. And when school ends you'll bring some back to get a snack. I love the bus, it's close to us and picks you up, so I'm not stuck to drive you down to the school ground. I love this day you're on your way friends by your side, life's a wild ride with ups and downs, some smiles, some frowns. And I love you; you know that's true! (Rhyme) 7/27/2018

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Date: 7/27/2018 11:32:00 AM
Very sweet Emile ! I love it :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2018 8:55:00 AM
This flowed very well, Emile. Just one spelling mistake - 'buss' - should read 'bus'
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Wendy, I appreciate your help my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2018 8:31:00 AM
I love it love it love it. What a delightfully fresh poem, Emile. The short lines and humour are totally a winning combo. Congrats.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Line, You know how I feel about your help and comments my friend, Emile.

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