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I Love U Haiku

subtle smile on lips
the sideways tilt of her head
my world is perfect

For James Edward Lee Sr’s “Haiku, I love U’ Contest.”

Written January 11th, 2018

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Robert Kinard

January 5, 2020 at 1:57 PM

I like this, how it speaks of a moment.

Richard Lamoureux

January 5, 2020 at 7:07 PM

Thanks Robert.

Robert Kinard

January 5, 2020 at 1:59 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 3, 2019 at 8:31 AM

Hello Richard, I read this poem, and found it to be romantic. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 3, 2019 at 11:40 AM

Sometimes i get log winded to but it depends on the poem. Yes I do like your poetry. have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

May 3, 2019 at 8:54 AM

Thanks Darlene. I don’t write many short pieces. I tend to be a bit long winded *lol*. I’m pleased you like this one. Hugs Rick.

Vladislav Raven

October 27, 2018 at 5:25 AM

Hi Richard, this is such a wonderful haiku. This one goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux

May 3, 2019 at 8:56 AM

Thanks Mike.

Casarah Nance

July 10, 2018 at 2:37 PM

aww i love this ;)

Marc Acrich

February 15, 2018 at 9:08 AM

ok I get it,

Maria Williams

February 3, 2018 at 8:25 PM

That means aside from her smile she was only wearing her skin! when she greeted you Richard! How sensual - she definitely was in love and no words were needed. All the best the contest....Maria

Susan Ashley

January 31, 2018 at 8:37 PM

Oh so lovely, tempting and sensuous Rick. I love the intent of the imagery. A great haiku! Warmest wishes my friend! ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux

February 1, 2018 at 9:34 AM

Thanks Susan :0)

Paul Callus

January 16, 2018 at 1:14 PM

I love your suggestive/descriptive entry, Richard...in moments such as this no words are needed! Pleased to see you tackling a short form. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

January 18, 2018 at 4:34 PM

Thanks Paul, I'm pleased you like this piece.

Eileen Manassian

January 15, 2018 at 4:43 AM

How deliciously sweet! Good luck, dear.

Richard Lamoureux

January 15, 2018 at 8:50 AM

Thanks Eileen, a bit of luck couldn’t hurt. Hugs Rick.

Laura Leiser

January 13, 2018 at 10:08 PM

Love Love Love it!! Good luck in the contest, Richard. :)

Richard Lamoureux

January 15, 2018 at 8:51 AM

Thanks Laura, I’m pleased by your response.

Andrea Dietrich

January 13, 2018 at 8:29 PM

where's your marmalade poem. With so many disgusting meats and other things and you chose marmalade. hahaha. Well, guess which fruit I cannot stand? Mango. I detest the yukky texture of it.

Richard Lamoureux

January 15, 2018 at 8:53 AM

Like you I am not a fan of the Mango.