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I Love U Haiku

subtle smile on lips the sideways tilt of her head my world is perfect For James Edward Lee Sr’s “Haiku, I love U’ Contest.” Written January 11th, 2018

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Robert Kinard

Date: 1/5/2020 1:57:00 PM

I like this, how it speaks of a moment.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2020 7:07:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Robert Kinard
Date: 1/5/2020 1:59:00 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/3/2019 8:31:00 AM

Hello Richard, I read this poem, and found it to be romantic. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/3/2019 11:40:00 AM

Sometimes i get log winded to but it depends on the poem. Yes I do like your poetry. have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2019 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Darlene. I don’t write many short pieces. I tend to be a bit long winded *lol*. I’m pleased you like this one. Hugs Rick.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/27/2018 5:25:00 AM

Hi Richard, this is such a wonderful haiku. This one goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2019 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Mike.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/10/2018 2:37:00 PM

aww i love this ;)

Marc Acrich

Date: 2/15/2018 9:08:00 AM

ok I get it,

Maria Williams

Date: 2/3/2018 8:25:00 PM

That means aside from her smile she was only wearing her skin! when she greeted you Richard! How sensual - she definitely was in love and no words were needed. All the best the contest....Maria

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/31/2018 8:37:00 PM

Oh so lovely, tempting and sensuous Rick. I love the intent of the imagery. A great haiku! Warmest wishes my friend! ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2018 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Susan :0)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2018 1:14:00 PM

I love your suggestive/descriptive entry, Richard...in moments such as this no words are needed! Pleased to see you tackling a short form. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2018 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Paul, I'm pleased you like this piece.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/15/2018 4:43:00 AM

How deliciously sweet! Good luck, dear.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, a bit of luck couldn’t hurt. Hugs Rick.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/13/2018 10:08:00 PM

Love Love Love it!! Good luck in the contest, Richard. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Laura, I’m pleased by your response.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2018 8:29:00 PM

where's your marmalade poem. With so many disgusting meats and other things and you chose marmalade. hahaha. Well, guess which fruit I cannot stand? Mango. I detest the yukky texture of it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 8:53:00 AM

Like you I am not a fan of the Mango.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2018 8:28:00 PM

I hope we BOTH interpreted it right.