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I Love I Cry I Feel

Today is one of those uncertain days It depends on an unknown factor It could the happiest day of my life Or it could turn out a disaster It's not a comfortable feeling to be in And until this factor is known I'll hold my breath in great anticipation Maybe today's the day I moan I realize tomorrow will still arrive No matter how this day turns out Have the love of friends and neighbours So it'll all be okay no doubt Silly me and my sensitive nature Us men are made of steel Well this guy doesn't fit the stereotype I love, I cry, I feel

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Terry Flood

Date: 10/5/2023 3:39:00 PM

Smashing write, Jack. Fear not, for we, the feelers, are a growing majority.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/6/2023 2:38:00 AM

Really like "we the feelers are a growing majority" the club members are increasing by leaps and bounds!!! Cheers my friend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/3/2023 7:49:00 AM

what an endearing poem, Jack. I can relate to not knowing a particular outcome on any given day...a bit unnerving at time. I came to the same conclusion, come what may today, for tomorrow will surely be. Wonderful piece, Sara PS...it's okay to be a sensitive man. My hubby's always been that way. Grateful for that aspect of him. Have a splendid day

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2023 8:53:00 AM

So your hubby is a sensitive man... much like yours truly! Are we above or below average? I'm assuming above average! You know... the "macho" thing! xxx

Andrew John

Date: 10/3/2023 5:02:00 AM

Well, I hope tomorrow does arrive for you, Jack. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2023 5:08:00 AM

Not too many tomorrows left for me I'm afraid! Cheers Andrew my friend!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/3/2023 4:22:00 AM

Its sad that society places labels and expects men to be made of steel, I admire emotions like this expressed in such a heartfelt manner. Very well delivered really. Men too feel cry and love, and its ok to be senstive sometimes. Brilliant rhymes too here! Enjoyed reading this and felt this

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2023 4:30:00 AM

Much appreciated dear friend! Thank you! xx

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/3/2023 4:18:00 AM

Beautiful last lines Jack

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2023 4:25:00 AM

Your comment is much appreciated... thank you my friend! xxx