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I Love I Cry I Feel

Today is one of those uncertain days It depends on an unknown factor It could the happiest day of my life Or it could turn out a disaster It's not a comfortable feeling to be in And until this factor is known I'll hold my breath in great anticipation Maybe today's the day I moan I realize tomorrow will still arrive No matter how this day turns out Have the love of friends and neighbours So it'll all be okay no doubt Silly me and my sensitive nature Us men are made of steel Well this guy doesn't fit the stereotype I love, I cry, I feel

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Date: 6/13/2023 8:50:00 AM
..interesting write...'today, a fact unkown' .....right on....today be a time count....to label whatever (ir)rational time manifests as.......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/13/2023 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Stan!
Date: 6/13/2023 8:48:00 AM
Wow Jack I love this one from you my friend, so sad not many have seen it. POTD quality very heartfelt and raw. A truth most men won't admit. I think the word is pride. You are a fine gentleman with a big heart and you will always do fine in all your endeavers, why you ask? The answer is plain, and that is because you are Jack. God bless you and always bring you peace of mind in any situation you are in. Have a nice day my friend and I will say a prayer in your honor to my Lord Jesus upstairs...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/13/2023 3:39:00 PM
All I can say is thank my dearest sweet friend Michael! x
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Michael Tor
Date: 6/13/2023 8:53:00 AM
This one is one of my all time favorites Jack I sense your waiting result is weighing heavy on you. I will pray for you to have great health and spirit too. The good Lord loves you Jack always remember that, and he can heal you if you reach out to him. Ok I'm done preaching. I do it because I genuinly care for you...

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