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I love collecting ladybugs and garden snails and slimy slugs But mommy hates me digging worms she doesn’t like them, how she squirms! I love to watch bright butterflies I’ll see them flying in blue skies Along with buzzing bumble bees - Does pollen ever make them sneeze! Nursery rhyme 5 Poetry contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 04/19/21

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Date: 5/8/2021 4:59:00 PM
This is great Jan, kiddies will love it, congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle xx
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Date: 4/24/2021 6:43:00 PM
Hello Jan ... a delightful children's poem Jan. Very positive and entertaining - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/27/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 8:19:00 PM
Great little poem, Jan, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/27/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Eve i think this is my favourite of the ones I've written for you :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 7:48:00 PM
Jan, this was delightful! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Kim :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 2:40:00 PM
Congrats on a deserved first place, Jan. Terry
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/27/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Terry :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 6:58:00 AM
Jan, a gem for the age group that would listen to this story, a real beauty - a truly enjoyable read. Congratulations on your 1st win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 6:43:00 AM
Hi Jan, This is an adorable take on the contest theme. It's so fitting the age group. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Alexis :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations - a wonderful nursery rhyme!
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Patri :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the top win, Jan. These are exactly what kids love! They don't care about pollen or sneezing!! BW ~ Mala
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/27/2021 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Mala :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2021 2:14:00 AM
I Loved this, a great nursery rhyme!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/23/2021 3:19:00 AM
thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/22/2021 11:12:00 PM
Lovely! I love bugs, too. Congratulations on your first place win with this awesome nursery rhyme that kids will surely love.
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Date: 4/23/2021 3:18:00 AM
Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/22/2021 4:55:00 PM
Awesome Jan! Just a fun all around write, great job!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/23/2021 3:17:00 AM
fun - that's what its all about isnt it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/22/2021 3:47:00 PM
I believe that your bugs are bugs 'as nouns only.' That is, they don't work as verbs: because they are so sweet, your bugs couldn't possibly 'bug' anyone! Sweet, gw
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/23/2021 3:17:00 AM
LOL I too hope my poem doesn't bug anyone lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/22/2021 5:49:00 AM
Wow! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. Thanks for sharing this, as well as the photos. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 4/22/2021 12:41:00 PM
Thanks beata:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/21/2021 10:45:00 AM
Hi. Love your ladybugs. I think of them as ladybirds. Red with black spots or black with red spots. The young ones will enjoy this and paint their own pictures. Tony X
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Date: 4/22/2021 12:41:00 PM
thanks Tony i too know them as ladybirds but bugs rhymed with slugs lol. i recall seeing pale yellow and black spotted ones and black with red spots when i was young , only ever see the common red one now:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 1:30:00 PM
absolutely adorable, jan!
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Date: 4/20/2021 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Ilene it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 11:23:00 AM
Clever and certainly original! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/20/2021 1:14:00 PM
without the contest prompts so many of my poems would never get written!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 7:57:00 AM
Lovely rhyme for children Jan, something about those little insects that kids are drawn to. Tom
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/21/2021 10:37:00 AM
thanks Tom I can imagine the grandkids love finding creepy crawlies:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 6:32:00 AM
Lady bugs are messengers of love, and I'm sending my lady bug over to you, with a note to say, " I love you " :) have a great day dear friend . Stay well and prosper.
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Date: 4/20/2021 1:12:00 PM
aww thanks Vie, we call them ladybirds but bugs fitted in with the rhyme scheme:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 6:30:00 AM
So cute Jan, The last line steals the show,' I really enjoyed, Good Luck xxoo
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Date: 4/20/2021 1:11:00 PM
SO glad you like that line Mike you have made my day:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 5:00:00 AM
Good one Jan - I like it very much. Best of luck. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 4/20/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 2:08:00 AM
Cute and fun. Sure bet for a podium finish. Best of luck in the contest, Jan. Terry
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/20/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Terry it was fun to write, i hope Eve likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/20/2021 1:33:00 AM
Woww.. What great idea Jan... Am sure kids would love it... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/20/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Ani:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/19/2021 11:11:00 PM
Cute poem. Jan. Best for a win.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/20/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Victor it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/19/2021 7:45:00 PM
A rhyme sure to delight and captivate and fill little ones with wonder. :D
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/20/2021 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn:-) hugs jan xx
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