I Lost

I lost what i can't have, I lost everything I wanted to have, I lost someone because I didn't see, I lost everything that would mean the world to me. I lost you to someone great, I lost me because I lost my faith, I lost hope in any future space, I lost you ever being in each other face, What I would give to show you once more how you were great. What I would give to have back everyting that was so great. I LOST!

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Jeanine Dejesus

Date: 4/19/2024 8:41:00 PM

Great poem. Your poem resonated with me in a profound way. I too have lost. It I'd a horrible feeling.

Diane Christian

Date: 4/17/2024 12:40:00 PM

There's an old sating here in UK sometimes you don't know what you have untill it's gone. My friend now regrets letting me go. We still talk on the phone but it will never go any further. They lied and led me up the garden path. My dad used to say there's always something better wairing round the corner. Better days are yet to come.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/14/2024 1:16:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.