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I Live In a Dream With You In Our Heavenly Game

You’re a vision of beauty that never ceases to amaze my mind I can see you in my heart even if I was blind You move me in my soul to adventurous places I’m truly in love with all of you’re different faces Don’t ever run away to far from my heart Any distance from you would rip my world apart You flicker in my eye and burn like the hottest flame I live in a dream with you in our heavenly game

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Sheryl Torrence

Date: 7/18/2011 9:24:00 AM

Very good, great message.

Kevin Clark
Date: 7/18/2011 5:00:00 PM

Thanks Sheryl

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/17/2011 6:50:00 AM

Beautifully written..The true words just flow. My favorite is "I’m truly in love with all of you’re different faces"...Hugs

Kevin Clark
Date: 7/17/2011 7:09:00 AM

Thank you Juanita for your comments

Gabriel Paczkowski

Date: 7/17/2011 6:17:00 AM

On first reading, I thought it cliche. But reading a couple times, I felt the thoughts behind it. How wonderful your muse must be, to evoke such admiration. I have one of those as well. Your poem, having made me think of her, brought a smile to my face. And isn't creating visuals that create unique responses the reason we are here?

Kevin Clark
Date: 7/17/2011 7:12:00 AM

Thanks Gabriel. There is simply no better compliment to my poetry than that of an emotional response. It truly gives me the drive to keep writing.

Kevin Clark
Date: 7/17/2011 7:12:00 AM

Thanks Gabriel. There is simply no better compliment to my poetry than that of an emotional response. It truly gives me the drive to keep writing.