I know this is not my best, it’s too blue
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I know this is not my best, it’s too blue.
And I know I’m a great disappointment to you.
I coulda tried to add a little bit more yellow.
But then, I only woulda been copying that other fellow.
And then we woulda had an even bigger issue to work through.
Copyright © Marinus Jansen | Year Posted 2025
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