I Know My Place - Contest

My position in life 
Seems to be in a queue,
Never quite getting to the front,
Wondering what I should do

Should  I change my name to "nearly",
That's got  a cheerful zing.
The one I would love dearly
is the one that goes with a "ring"

That queue is long and painful
walked it once before.
Nearly at the front,  then 
he was called to God's door.

Now I wait and wonder
If next time it will go right
Trouble is in frustration
I have a verbal fight

Think I have worked it out now
Some duct tape to shut me up
Smile sweetly and nod my head
Do you think that will be enough?


dated 09 September 2013.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/15/2013 4:47:00 PM
If I get to answer the question, the answer is no that won't work, not for long anyway. Really nice poem, good work.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 7:59:00 PM
Hi Wayland, thanks for commenting ...Seren
Date: 9/15/2013 3:28:00 PM
Please don't put that duct tape on your mouth. I would hate to see you speechless. Witty delightful read.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 8:03:00 PM
Oops my I pad missed letters... Should have read, It could be a B.... To get back off ...Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 8:00:00 PM
It oud be. b.... To get back off ....lol. Seren
Date: 9/12/2013 11:18:00 AM
Well, well.... So this is Seren? :o) Very nicely written. Brought me a smile, as always. Nice to see you by my page. Thanks for stopping by.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 8:01:00 PM
Lol Dan is tns really me, a chopsy blonde....Seren
Date: 9/10/2013 4:34:00 PM
Seren, I LOVE how you did this. One of your best humorous poems in my opinion!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2013 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Andrea ...Seren
Date: 9/9/2013 8:08:00 PM
Seren, say no to the duct tape and let your inner self be heard. The duct tape line made me laugh out loud, because I feel that way sometimes as well. You are too strong a woman to nod sweetly, you know it won't be enough. You deserve the best always. Heartfelt write! Hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2013 11:56:00 PM
Lol Cecilia can you be chopsy as well ...Seren
Date: 9/9/2013 12:32:00 PM
This is a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2013 11:56:00 PM
Hi Russell thanks ....Seren
Date: 9/9/2013 12:16:00 PM
Seren.....This is so moving. Called to God's door...I'm so sorry...Hope you find that ring soon...This write has the ring of truth...It will do well....Bless you...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2013 11:58:00 PM
Hi Eileen what will be will be..thats life ...Seren
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