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I Know An Elderly Lady

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This is one of the first poems I wrote. It's not a masterpiece, it's very basic, naive even, but it came out of a very bleak and traumatic time of my life. It won't win any prizes but to this day its message makes it one of the most important poems I have written, to me anyway.

 


 

I know an elderly lady At her window she sits She's always there when I go out watching the world and people about She waves and I wave back an exchange of smiles given I exist and she does too It's good of her to confirm I do

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Date: 11/25/2023 5:51:00 AM
My first thoughts went to Eleanor Rigby. Yes, these little memories stay with us. Small acts of kindness and affirmation
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Date: 11/25/2023 6:17:00 AM
Oh yes, she "waits at the window", interesting thought Tom, thanks for reading

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