Notes About The Poem

inspired by beautiful photo taken by Timothy McGuire~

I Knew

I woke before sunrise
Beauty all around me
An overwhelming silence

I sat and took it in
Food for my soul

The loon called out
From the stillness of the lake
I knew I was at heaven’s gate



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNSETTING WHISPERS~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Submitted on March 9, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE B sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  HONORABLE MENTION
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Really lovely Line. Your concluding line really summarizes the poem beautifully. Congratulations on your HM
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.
Pederson Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 8:04 AM
I also can hear the calling but hope it was only the loon. good imagery and sensory intake. nice and soothing
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Douglas.
Wolf Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Ah, a lovely 'looner' landscape, indeed!! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 9:21 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:36 PM
WONDERFULL!!! I love it!
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely inspirational photo, Timothy. Glad you approve.
Cholt Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Beautiful poem.
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much, WA.
Romios Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 10:54 AM
How beautiful and serene, Line Panagiota
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much, Panagiota.
Mchattie Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 9:41 AM
The loons would start to call at dusk on our lake. You're right. It's a beautiful moment. Have a good day.
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Maybe our loons in Canada like to get an early start. LOL
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