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I Just Wanna Be With You

I just wanna be with you No matter what you say to hurt me You just cant see The love that lies inside of what we could be If only we were together Then you would be much better I just wanna be with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 11:00:00 AM
I like this one, alexz! I know what it means. Thank you for your comment, and I did have feelings for that one...once. I am an old man, btw, 37. (lol). Love your work, and keep it up:)
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:54:00 PM
This is endearing. sweet and slightly sad. Nice job. Jese
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Date: 1/22/2009 10:32:00 PM
dont we all feel this way
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Date: 1/13/2009 8:32:00 AM
Beautiful write.. I wanna be with my guy too..
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Date: 1/5/2009 4:56:00 PM
nice... *breana
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Date: 1/5/2009 9:01:00 AM
I really love this. It's amazing!
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Date: 1/3/2009 3:36:00 PM
how you been and what you been uo to since yesterday?
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Date: 1/3/2009 9:21:00 AM
for as long as there is a computer and address i will be yours.jhl
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Date: 1/2/2009 12:14:00 PM
O. K. you can be with me. but for only five minutes. jhl
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Date: 1/2/2009 10:49:00 AM
why do you keep saying that, as you het older they get better.
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Date: 1/2/2009 10:39:00 AM
Guess you know what you want, hope she knows what she wants too. how have you been and how are ya poems coming along.
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Date: 1/2/2009 2:45:00 AM
Hi Alex, haven't read you in a bit but this is as always very sad. loveudo, Laurie
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Date: 1/1/2009 8:46:00 PM
lol great write
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