I Just Wanna Be With You

I just wanna be with you
No matter what you say to hurt me
You just cant see
The love that lies inside of what we could be
If only we were together
Then you would be much better
I just wanna be with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 6, 2009 at 11:00 AM
I like this one, alexz! I know what it means. Thank you for your comment, and I did have feelings for that one...once. I am an old man, btw, 37. (lol). Love your work, and keep it up:)
Loveless Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 6:54 PM
This is endearing. sweet and slightly sad. Nice job. Jese
Kane Jr. Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 10:32 PM
dont we all feel this way
Montgomery Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Beautiful write.. I wanna be with my guy too..
Wiggins Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 4:56 PM
nice... *breana
Montgomery Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 9:01 AM
I really love this. It's amazing!
Burton Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 3:36 PM
how you been and what you been uo to since yesterday?
Loving Iii Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 9:21 AM
for as long as there is a computer and address i will be yours.jhl
Loving Iii Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 12:14 PM
O. K. you can be with me. but for only five minutes. jhl
Burton Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 10:49 AM
why do you keep saying that, as you het older they get better.
Burton Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Guess you know what you want, hope she knows what she wants too. how have you been and how are ya poems coming along.
Ginn Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 2:45 AM
Hi Alex, haven't read you in a bit but this is as always very sad. loveudo, Laurie
Faulkner Avatar
January 1, 2009 at 8:46 PM
lol great write
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