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Naked branches of November's oak grasp at dawn's slate sky before the lake's mirror as though for sustenance. I stand at water's still edge, seeing the tree's perfect reflection gnarled in umber chaos, reaching for proof of truth in the wasteland of decaying society, that there is still a connection binding us through turmoil of death, separation and change intruding upon our modern lives. Leafless limbs reach heavenward in arboreal prayer for a glimpse of confirmation. I, in my consternation wonder if there's any point to my search. Should I always have faith in the future unknown of God's guiding hand, or should I accept that we are doomed to disperse like the tree's October leaves and blow away, leaving our shared past at the mercy of the elements?

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Date: 10/9/2018 3:44:00 PM
Beautifully penned, such a thought provoking piece Dale - I have no particular faith - who knows in time if i will go down that path one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/9/2018 5:15:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Nice to hear from you.
Date: 9/27/2018 9:53:00 AM
Great use of imagery, Dale:)
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Date: 9/27/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 9/26/2018 12:48:00 AM
Dale, the lack of warmth coincides with November's chill and the lack of harmony in today's society. It calls for profound introspection. Very well written! : )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/26/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Date: 9/25/2018 2:48:00 PM
That's a deep thought provoking poem. Love the imagery in the first stanza. And the picture is gorgeous.
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Date: 9/25/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Date: 9/25/2018 10:07:00 AM
I found this to be such a thought provoking piece Dale and a very beautiful write. I really enjoyed it and I truly share your sentiments. Keep the Faith !!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/25/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks, Mike. Good to hear from you.

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