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I, In My Consternation

Naked branches of November's oak
grasp at dawn's slate sky
before the lake's mirror
as though for sustenance.

I stand at water's still edge, 
seeing the tree's perfect reflection
gnarled in umber chaos,
reaching for proof of truth
in the wasteland of decaying society,
that there is still a connection
binding us through turmoil
of death, separation and change
intruding upon our modern lives.

Leafless limbs reach heavenward
in arboreal prayer for a glimpse of confirmation.
I, in my consternation wonder 
if there's any point to my search.

Should I always have faith
in the future unknown
of God's guiding hand,
or should I accept that we are doomed
to disperse like the tree's October leaves
and blow away, leaving our shared past
at the mercy of the elements?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Beautifully penned, such a thought provoking piece Dale - I have no particular faith - who knows in time if i will go down that path one day:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Thanks, Jan. Nice to hear from you.
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Great use of imagery, Dale:)
Cozart Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Thank you, Jo.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Dale, the lack of warmth coincides with November's chill and the lack of harmony in today's society. It calls for profound introspection. Very well written! : )
Cozart Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Krampe Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 2:48 PM
That's a deep thought provoking poem. Love the imagery in the first stanza. And the picture is gorgeous.
Cozart Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Gentile Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 10:07 AM
I found this to be such a thought provoking piece Dale and a very beautiful write. I really enjoyed it and I truly share your sentiments. Keep the Faith !!!
Cozart Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Thanks, Mike. Good to hear from you.
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