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I Held the Noose You Tied the Knot

Breathing; trusting . . .not a habit When I see the blade. . . I tend to grab it I used to feel so lost; so scared I gave up, 'cause no one cared I held the gun. . . but you're the one . . .who aimed the shot I held the noose. . . but you're the one . . .who tied the knot I swear I'm gonna cry 'sick of trying to be tough I swear I'm gonna die 'cause no one showed me love Breathing; trusting . . .never will trust is vain, my breath is still. . . Closure has come to me . . .myself This is where I'll stay; this hell. . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/26/2014 1:46:00 AM
Ps., Today I Went To The Movies Again And Watched, 'Saving Mr. Banks' ˜ I Thought That It Was Much Better Then 'Her' Or 'American Hustle' But In Hollywood, As Their Cronies Better Offspring Perhaps, They Hold A Much More Tainted As Precise View: Tainted Albeit ? Why Not, We Live In A Pretty Godless' ? Factory.... Love John
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Date: 1/26/2014 1:33:00 AM
† Without Trust There Is No Faith Baby Girl! I Know Beyound The Slightest Doubts That I Won't Be Hell! Trust Me My Love.... Congratulations, Upon Your Magnificent Beauty's Compelling Feature ˜ My Love, Forever, John
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:07:00 AM
Though I do not know you I will tell you well...I will always love you to keep me out of hell.
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Date: 12/26/2010 4:12:00 PM
love yew dana:/ beatiful but scary, unfortunately i feel like i inspired this one:/
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Date: 12/24/2010 10:28:00 AM
You wont be dying on my watch, I'll gather all my Knights from the round table and we will read your poetry and breath life, have a great Christmas friend
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:44:00 AM
a super wow! Dana,, deep and its tough when they don't realize they are the cause,.. have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:14:00 PM
Very deep emotional write Dana and surely an intense creation.. luv the presentation ... very vocal in words luv..
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Date: 12/23/2010 3:57:00 PM
Heavy ~ Great emotions and imagery!!!We love you!!!Nice~Rick
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