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I Heard The Whip-Poor-Will sing

Down where the lavender wisteria blooms. For the first time this spring, and early in the morning I heard the whip-poor-will sing its intriguing tune. Later, when I looked out the kitchen window. Birds of many species were swarming freshly filled birdfeeders. House finches, red cardinals, and sparrows as well Doves upon the ground nibbled and were well fed. Birds' melodies mix with the sighing of the pines. At the faint light of spring's dawn How nature's symphony fills the morn's air An awakening of all my senses, Beauty exploding everywhere. The Whip-poor-will's haunting call, Echoes through the misty hollow A song of deep mystery, A melody touches my soul. Wisteria petals dance with the gentle breeze, Their fragrance intoxicating, As the birds flit and flutter, Feeding on the bounty In this moment of quiet reverence, I am reminded of the interconnectedness, Of all living things in this world, Bound by the threads of existence. So I listen to the Whip-poor-will's song, Though brief, letting it carry me away, To a place of peace and harmony, Where the wisteria blooms forevermore.
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M  Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:53 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Sara….a lovely poem with wonderful natural imagery! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Why, thank you, Deb. I appreciate the visit and congratulations. I am honored that you would say it is lovely. Sara K
Jones Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 12:37 AM
Belated congratulations on your lovely potd!
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:53 AM
Thank you, Karen, for dropping by and taking time to read and comment on my work. Sara K
Baker Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Sara! It was a lovely poem and the imagery was delightful, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, Bill. I am delighted you like it. Sara K
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Spring time is near and the birds are always a blessing to hear. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Eve, Your visit is encouraging and uplifting. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work. Sara K
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:19 PM
Dear Sara, So delighted to see your poem being chosen as POTD. A soft, soothing, heart-touching feeling envelops my soul as I read your poem depicting sounds of nature - flowers blooming, and birds chirping around bird-feeders. Congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Thank you, Malabika. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work. Sara K
Nicole Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 4:38 PM
'It's ' a song of deep mystery, ' as the ' melody touches my soul. ' So beautiful, indeed. A soft reminder that God is truly everywhere. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:49 AM
Yes, it is a song of deep mystery to me, Brandy. As the weather warms up more, they will sing almost non-stop at twilight and then again just before dawn. They are such a comfort in the summer as they are or seem to be so stable. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
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March 31, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Beautiful poetry Sara, love to hear the birds sing and wisteria is such a lovey flower. Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:22 PM
I am delighted that you enjoy the birds as well. You totally understand the meaning of the poem since you do, Berly. Your visit to say congratulations was so thoughtful. Sara K
Bowring Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Many congratulations dear Sara on POTD. This is such a beautiful, uplifting and delightful read which is perfect for Easter Sunday. I love all the imagery and sounds of nature that you have so skilfully captured. The last stanza is especially gorgeous! Loved reading this. Thank you for sharing this gem. Happy Easter! Blessings and smiles :):)
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:21 PM
I am delighted that you enjoyed it, Christina. I always need all the blessings I can get. Easter has been nice so far. Sara K
May Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 9:59 AM
Wonderful write Sara, Congrats on POTD
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Your visit was just what I needed, Joseph. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:54 AM
- Beautiful poem, Sara :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and taking time to say congratulations. Sara K
Lawless Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Nicely done....a slow down......stop a while.....relax....take a breath....and listen with me poem....great job Sara
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:19 PM
I hope that you did slow down and relax. Nature can help us do that for at least a little while. John, thank you for the visit. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write. "Happy Easter" Have a blessed day.....................
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:18 PM
So the day has been nice, Paula. Thanks for the visit with congratulations. Sara K
Calasibetta Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! I can hear the “Whip-poor-will” in your beautifully crafted poem. Happy Easter. Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Why, thank you, Paulette. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Huge congratulations on this wonderfully written nature POTD dear Sara. Your sixth stanza draws me in. Happy Easter! :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:18 AM
Wonderful that the sixth stanza drew you in, Linda. We are all interconnected in one way or another. Thanks for stopping by with congratulations and the Easter greetings. Sara K
Greenhough Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on winning the POTD. The fresh, nostalgic words took me back to rural living near meadows and forests.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Just beautiful, Sara! Whip-poor-will goes nicely with Wisteria! God bless, happy Easter, and Congrats on POTD, dear lady! A fave for me!
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:17 AM
So gracious of you to fave this one, Kim. I appreciate the visit with congratulations and Easter greetings. Sara K
Gentile Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Sara, what a beautiful experience you have so eloquently penned for the magnificence of nature and Spring! Congratulations on your POTD honors!! Happy Easter!
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Mike, I am delighted that you found my work to be eloquently penned. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
Pandit Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:45 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Sara. Enjoy your special day, today.
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:15 AM
So thoughtful of you to stop back by with congratulations, Vijay. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Sara, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Tania, for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the compliment. Sara K
Elliott Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:26 AM
A huge Congratulations on this grand POTD, Sara. Enjoy your special poetry day and Happy Easter. ~
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Thank you, Regina, for stopping by with congratulations and the Easter Greetings. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Dearest Sara, Yes, your poem is an exquisite symphony of nature's beauty and wonder. Your beautiful imagery transports me to a realm where every line is filled with the melody of life. Congratulations on achieving Poem of the Day! Your words are not just poetry but a testament to the interconnectedness and magic of our world. Keep enchanting us with your artistry! - Blessings, Daniel
One Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Congratulations on POTD with our wonderful poem..
Mcintosh Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:07 AM
Beautiful. Love it. Love birds. Congratulations on POTD and God bless you this Easter. Much love, Gina
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Thank you, Regina for the blessing for Easter and for the congratulations. I appreciate you dropping by . Sara K
Empress Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations on receivinh potd dear sara. Through your words i saw wisterias dancing and heard birdsongs so soulful. How stunning and beautiful is this. Flows with such heartfelt imagery in the most artistic manner. This is one of my most fave poems written by you. I love it’ sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Delighted that you enjoyed it, IE. Sometimes one just comes in and we are blessed to be able to write it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:09 AM
No sweeter sounds than birdsong Sara, Congratulations on the honour of POTD. Happy Easter to you. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:32 AM
Thank you, Tom for the Easter greeting and noticing my poem as POTD. Sara K
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