I Heard I Might Find a Poet Here Part 2

Time moves slower than a rusted windmill on a still day 
as I am unable to avert my stare, frozen in this spot,  
captivated by an intoxicating charm smoother than Tennessee whiskey 
that hasn’t seen the light of day since old Jack Daniels passed,
and in this catatonic state I am also hearing things too, did she say poet?  
 
Someone drops a quarter in the juke box, Sinatra croons from overhead speakers, 
“Strangers in the night” Appropriate I think as I fumble to form a coherent 
sentence while gazing, recklessly submerged in endless chestnut eyes,
drowning in dark melted chocolate sweeter than hometown honey
 
She pulls a slow sensuous drag from her half spent Virginia Slims,
perfect lips release the scarlet smudged filter, exhaling a stream of smoke, 
a light grey cloud cascading lazily but deliberately in my face
and with a sly smirk sighs, “Cat got your tongue?”

Blinking back to consciousness, or some reasonable facsimile,
I attempt again to respond as Angelo behind the bar, tosses me a life line
”Another?” he points to my near empty bottle pitching 
a white towel to his shoulder. “Yeah, yes… you?” I mumble awkwardly in her 
direction pleading silently to myself, get it together man

Flicking ashes in a Stella Artois ashtray, she lifts the glass to her rose petal mouth
empties it in one smooth seductive swallow, then removes the olive, 
glances at me through black swan lashes, brings it suggestively to her lips 
and places it on her tongue 

My breath exits faster than a 38 caliber screaming goodbye to a pulled trigger. 
“How nice of you to offer,” she replies in a hushed lullaby tone. 
I nod to the bartender and he gives me a wink.
He’s seen it all, I think to myself 

Placing a bewitching hand gently atop mine she inquires, “So, can you help me?” 
My stomach, obviously all along one enormous cocoon erupts releasing
every butterfly known to mankind, all of which now frantically flutter 
inside of me, I lean a little heavier on the bar for support, it’s almost not enough

Angelo returns, setting a fresh martini in front of her, a cold beer for me. 
Nervously I bring the bottle to my mouth, when I notice she raises her 
glass in my direction. What an idiot, I mumble as I retreat just in 
time from drinking to touch her glass with mine

“To the sexiest woman I have ever seen.” I can’t believe I said that, 
she looks away feigning shyness. 
We both take a drink, almost in unison, 
liquid harmony, the perfect duet 

The cold beer feels good going down my parched throat,
as a freak thunderstorm popping up over a drought stricken landscape might, 
only I plan on absorbing mine more rapidly
and having more fun as I do. 

“Are you planning on getting me drunk before you answer my question?” 
she giggles taking another sip, flashing a neon smile 
which ignites in me a prior unknown courage, “No, not all,” I answer. 
“I have been known to jot down a poetic line or two”

To be continued…maybe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/26/2016 1:44:00 PM
I didn't think it could get any better than the first part, you've got me wanting more. I can vividly picture this in my mind, no easy feat!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, I hope those pictures are enjoyable. :) Thanks again Paloma, I am glad you are enjoying these poems.
Date: 10/25/2016 8:04:00 PM
Ok...I'm hooked...off to part three
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Tim for reading these poems. I am glad you liked them.
Date: 10/24/2016 11:46:00 PM
I insist on another chapter...Now I'm curious what is to follow...Knowing your writing it would be something different...than one can imagine..So Im intrgued to know..Lovely story...I I love how you go in detail with the descriptions.. It makes me feel like I'm reading it in a book and watching it in a movie...Bravo >> Charma.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2016 9:22:00 AM
Well, if you insist. :) Thank you my friend for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 10/24/2016 9:25:00 PM
You are such a tease. I love this story. You are quite the storyteller:)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel, I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 10/24/2016 9:05:00 PM
I'm enjoying this story very much. You can end it here and leave the rest to our imaginations, however I prefer that you write a chapter 3. Please:')Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Alexis so very much. I am considering adding one more to this collection. And since you said "Please". :)
Date: 10/24/2016 7:39:00 PM
Wow chris, this is great mate
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Date: 10/25/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Rick for always supporting and encouraging me.
Date: 10/24/2016 6:41:00 PM
Continued 'maybe'?? :0 ... Oh no. It must continue! Amazing it is! :)
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Date: 10/25/2016 9:26:00 AM
If you say so Heidi. :) I think there will be one more. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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