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Premiere Contest WinnerI Have Things To Tell You, Mom


It took me hours and hours on the bus to arrive Mother,

and by the time I got to your tomb the red rose I picked

was wilted but still full of love.  I have things to tell you Mom.

Sad things and happy things, things only you would understand.  

Sitting on the grass amongst the tombs I trace your beautiful

name with my finger.  And I remember . . . 


all the times at the kitchen table when I told you my

worries and you listened and did not say a word until I finished.

And I would ask, Mom what should I do?  Then you would say,

you know what to do . . . 


Why did you always know what was in my heart and soul.  Oh, the

countless times you sat upon the edge of my bed as I wept

over some silly thing.  And those days in the garden when we

planted flowers and I told you of my day and dreams.

And how deeply we cried . . . 
 

together when my baby died.  Our hearts broken and forever

melted together.  And even now, Mom, I imagine whispering

in your ear whenever I need you, I can almost hear your sweet 

voice saying, you know what to do.  I taught you well daughter,

so you could follow your own path . . .

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May 4, 2015


Poetry/Free Verse/I have things to tell you, Mom
Copyright Protected, ID 05-669-177-04
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


Submitted to the Premier contest, Best Free Verse
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke

First Place
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Written for the Standard contest, Mom's Ear, 
sponsor, Craig Cornish,  Judged 2015

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Jayasankar Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 11:36 PM
Oh my my... How can I not FAV this poem... I have no words to tell you what I feel NOW as I read this dear Constance...Hugs.. ~ Ani
La France Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Ani, you have picked a very meaningful older poem of mine to visit, I understand when you say you have no words and thank you so much for the FAV, love _Constance
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:26 AM
The honesty with which you pour emotions of love, pain, loss and nostalgia flows through your words. I could feel the love that nourishes you and the memories that strengthen your bond. Your words are poignant, beautiful and heartfelt Constance. Congratulations on your top placement :) Much love
Ashley Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 10:55 AM
The sad beauty of your poem allows me to enter into the intimate circle of love between you and your Mom. It is an honor to become part of your emotionally revealing poem.. your potent poignancy moves me very deeply. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win in Chantelle's contest, Dear Heart. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Somethings are timeless and this is one of them. Enjoy your win and day.............
Dutta Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Big Congrats to win top. I am touched. I feel your emotion from core of my heart Love.
Mitra Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 10:25 PM
My dear friend, you brought tears to my eyes, yes as long as we have a mother to share ... it's a great treasure ... great deserving poem to win hearts ...my best wishes
Watt Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 1:57 PM
"you know what to do", such amazing advice to hear from your mother. It shows her trust in you to follow your heart, which she knew to be good. Beautiful and heartwarming poetry, Constance. I congratulate you for your top win, it is well deserved. Hugs ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 1:48 PM
I see the last comments on this one were back in 2015. It remains a very poignant tribute to your mother and I am proud to be first here to say congrats on your top placement today!
Gasun Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations for a very lovely poem for your dearest mom and your super win my dear friend, Broken! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Oh my, Broken...what emotion and sadness expressed to us with your words that come from your life experience. My heart aches but still your are to be commended for this beautiful poem and congratulated for your awesome win First Place win! 7+Fav...Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 12:57 PM
A blessing to read, I'm deeply moved. LINDA
Mandani Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 6:37 PM
You know what to do. That's why you are on the top!! A nice write.
A  Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. SKAT
Roper Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 8:19 AM
B.W., My heart aches from the emotion you have placed in your poem that is why your poems are so outstanding. Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7+++ to a, very well deserved to a wonderful poetess.
Lawless Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Beautifully written ...can't say more the tears are getting on the keyboard. Congrats.
Ebbs Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:12 PM
A very touching poem Broken!
Richards Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 7:36 PM
This poem is so touching, and it reaches that place in my heart that is filled with similar memories. Losing my own mother when I was young, when she was too young, I still long for her to hear my words. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) Hugs Jan xx
Spirits Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 5:09 PM
VERY AMAZING POEM, I RELATE DEEPLY.
Kiser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Beautifully sweet and sincere; I'm sure she'd appreciate it.
Pinet Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Your words gently take the reader to your private place and we too can share the moment and the memories. Emile.
Ackerson Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Warm and heartfelt, Broke. Leaves me soft...
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 1:49 PM
- A heartbreaking visit to your mother's burial place, B.W. - (I "speak" always with my mother at her burial place) - I wish you luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 12:19 PM
This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem and you convey the emotions so very well. Mothers that really listen to their children are the best, and I'm thankful I have a mother like this. Thanks for sharing, and this should rate way up there in the contest, I think.
Das Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Your sad poems sometimes make me cry. There is no greater love than that of a mother's. So heartfelt. You pour your heart out into your poems. Sad but beautiful. #7
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