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I Have Flutters-Eight Word Challenge

Can you see those waves out there upon the water wafting The wind clashing across the water whispers the sound of silence With this moonlit night the stars are glowing across the water waves Do you think perchance I may hold your hand while we stand on shore My heart had flutters as she reached for my hand and her eyes sparkling My mind was racing thinking of folly when she looked into my eyes I was getting a little dank underneath my arms from the heat of her body I tried to daub it when she was not looking an embarrassment I must say Happenstances may have been worse for the rain started to fall We had decided that it would be best to go into my cabin for the rest Contest Name: Eight word challenge-Barbenesque Sponsored by: John Hamilton Date Created: 01/21/2019 1.Wafting 2.Daub 3.Whispers 4.Dank 5.Flutters 6.Perchance 7.Folly 8.Happenstance

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:38:00 PM
Lovely poem, it reads so fluidly, and has such emotion, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/22/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Bobby for your entry, nicely done, this was a difficult challenge for sure!
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Bobby May
Date: 2/22/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you very much John for this honor!
Date: 1/22/2019 7:52:00 AM
Hi Bobby, I like how you used the chosen words to write a lovely and romantic write. I could just picture the whole scene. Good job! And straight into my favs!I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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