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I Hate War

I hate war I hate war War kills War maims War widows War orphans It leaves a deep scar Not only on the land That takes years to heal But also in the hearts of those Who are affected by the war I am one of those Who carry a deep scar To this day More than sixty years later During WWII under Japan I lost my brother, my best friend He left home As a vibrant 15 year old boy To save his father from Japanese prison He returned home As a worn out 18 year old man He died a year later from his injury When he died Light went out of my life Nothing has been the same Since then I often ask Why do we fight? Why do we kill? Isn’t it more fun To play together instead? To sing together instead? I picture a scene Where people of diverse cultures Hold hands across vast continents Over deep oceans Form a giant circle Look at each other with broad smiles Sing a might song of brotherhood Wouldn’t it be wonderful If that day comes In our life time?

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Date: 8/12/2019 6:38:00 AM
(2) Enjoy your work very much, Hi-Dong - it has an honesty and humility that is rare these days, and I appreciate you sharing it. Blessings and joy to you and yours! ~ The Bard
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Hi-Dong Chai
Date: 8/12/2019 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poems. After publishing several long stories, that took me dozens of years, I decided to spend my twilight years writing poems early this year, 2019. It has been fun. By the way I am an engineer and a Korean.
Date: 8/12/2019 6:37:00 AM
Indeed, it would ... wonderful write! I believe human nature is innately self-destructive and have doubts about its survival, but I also believe that love is the one force that transcends time, and eclipses all others. Hope remains, by the sheer power of love. (I have a number of pieces on war you may find interest in, such as "Travel Light", which was used to teach a War Poetry class at Bilkent University in Ankara, "No Heroes - WWI", "Crimson Pacific", and "Return To Flanders Field").
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Date: 8/11/2019 7:48:00 AM
Your poetry touches my heart...so heartfelt! Welcome to PS! ...Kim
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Hi-Dong Chai
Date: 8/12/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thank you!

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