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I Hate That Wordsworth

I HATE THAT WORDSWORTH
“I wandered lonely as a cloud”. So starts the famous Wordsworth ode My teacher makes me read out loud. To me that Wordsworth is a pain; For, if I stumble o’er his words, The teacher says, “Again, again.” While children in the class all titter, Enjoying my predicament. No wonder Wordsworth makes me bitter. The poem’s silly and here’s why. How can there be a lonely cloud When there are hundreds in the sky? And though some daffodils are fine, I think it’s overdoing things To see ten thousand in a line. My heart does not with pleasure fill When oft upon my couch I lie, To think of dancing daffodils So, sorry Wordsworth, I’m afraid Your daffodils just bring me pain. I simply hear my teacher say, Go back and read it all again 14th April 2019 Quirky Tercets Contest Sponsor - Nina Parmenter

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Date: 4/28/2019 6:48:00 AM
nicely done fun!
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Date: 4/15/2019 1:50:00 PM
Very clever and I enjoyed it..althoughI love that poem...smiling. BG
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Date: 4/15/2019 7:23:00 AM
Superbly done, Bryn. Delightful.
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 4/15/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Line
Date: 4/15/2019 6:15:00 AM
LOL. Wordsworth, whoever. We all learned to rhyme from them and some poetic mastery. There are some poets I cannot bear who are very popular. Wordsworth was not a connection for you. It doesn't lessen him for others, But you do have a masters degree in combining humor and poetry I got slammed here for making a joke about Shakespeare. It was not putting him down at all.Panagiota
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 4/15/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you for the comments Panagiota. My poem was, of course, written with tongue firmly in cheek. It's over 65 years since I was asked to read anything in front of the class!

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