Lewis Raynes Poet Quatrain

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I Had a Drink With a Great Idea

A great idea came to my door today, 
Came in, sat down, and said,
“If you work with me, all of the day,
Good times for you are ahead”.

So we finished our cake and tea and stood, 
Made plans to buy the supplies
For the day of create, make and concoct, 
So this idea could then realize. 

That’s when we met this wall out the door, 
This wall that got in our way,
This insurmountable wall needing a new idea, 
This wall that caused a delay.

So we called a new idea to come along,
To break the wall and make the path clear,
Instead this new idea convinced all of us there, 
Just to go to the pub for a beer.

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Edward Mccall July 18, 2017 at 9:37 AM What a cool title and what a cool phone that go with it. Lewis Raynes July 23, 2017 at 10:35 PM Thanks Edward

Charlie Smith July 14, 2017 at 1:38 PM Now that's using your brain, fun write Lewis... Lewis Raynes July 14, 2017 at 9:42 PM lol.... yep, thanks Charlie

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 14, 2017 at 10:48 AM Lol awesome! You had me going there, love the most probable conclusion. :) xomo! Lewis Raynes July 14, 2017 at 12:44 PM Thanks Maureen, yep u got it.

Joanna Daniel July 14, 2017 at 5:47 AM Ha ha, Lewis, anyway you could at least pen it down :) Lewis Raynes July 14, 2017 at 8:07 AM Haha, that was the third idea at the pub. Thanks Jo

Francine Roberts July 13, 2017 at 8:47 PM my great ideas seem to go the same way, Your poem made me smile, Cheers Lewis Raynes July 13, 2017 at 8:51 PM Thanks Francine.... lots of good ideas walk out my door too.