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I Had a Drink With a Great Idea

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A great idea came to my door today, Came in, sat down, and said, “If you work with me, all of the day, Good times for you are ahead”. So we finished our cake and tea and stood, Made plans to buy the supplies For the day of create, make and concoct, So this idea could then realize. That’s when we met this wall out the door, This wall that got in our way, This insurmountable wall needing a new idea, This wall that caused a delay. So we called a new idea to come along, To break the wall and make the path clear, Instead this new idea convinced all of us there, Just to go to the pub for a beer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/18/2017 9:37:00 AM
What a cool title and what a cool phone that go with it.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/23/2017 10:35:00 PM
Thanks Edward
Date: 7/14/2017 1:38:00 PM
Now that's using your brain, fun write Lewis...
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Date: 7/14/2017 9:42:00 PM
lol.... yep, thanks Charlie
Date: 7/14/2017 10:48:00 AM
Lol awesome! You had me going there, love the most probable conclusion. :) xomo!
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Date: 7/14/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, yep u got it.
Date: 7/14/2017 5:47:00 AM
Ha ha, Lewis, anyway you could at least pen it down :)
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Date: 7/14/2017 8:07:00 AM
Haha, that was the third idea at the pub. Thanks Jo
Date: 7/13/2017 8:47:00 PM
my great ideas seem to go the same way, Your poem made me smile, Cheers
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Date: 7/13/2017 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Francine.... lots of good ideas walk out my door too.

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