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I Finally Got To Kiss You

I finally got to kiss you I finally got to kiss you and my poor heart skipped a beat My mind was whirling rapidly when our lips came to meet I can’t explain the feeling I was brimming with desire Heat was running down my spine, raging like a fire My entire body quivered I was shaking head to toe I never felt a kiss so good and wanted you to know I finally got to kiss you but there’s nothing I could say Because I could not seem to talk, you took my breath away

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Becca Teagan

Date: 12/6/2016 12:19:00 PM

I love all of your poems so much, I feel cant even express how much. You are so good

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2016 12:32:00 PM

Well, I can't even express how much happiness your comments bring to me Rebecca. I am humbled by your words today. You are far too kind to me.

Paloma P

Date: 12/6/2016 6:38:00 AM

The flow of your rhymes take my breath away! :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2016 9:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Paloma, I am glad it did. : )

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/6/2016 2:30:00 AM

:) Indeed a good kiss leaves no space for words...Only silence..Hey dont kiss her for too long..We need your words here : ). A very romantic poem..How can I not favour this? A fave.

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2016 9:51:00 AM

Charmaine, I'm going to have to think about that...kissing or poetry, hmmm. Well, maybe a little of both. :) Thank you so very much.

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/5/2016 8:25:00 PM

Wowwie... Now this reminds me of my first kiss ;) anyhow this one is excitingly romantic and a one that will be treasured in your heart to infinity :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thank you so very much Akkina for your always kind and encouraging thoughts. I appreciate you my friend.

Xavier Johnson

Date: 12/5/2016 8:21:00 PM

Very craft! Keep it up.

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2016 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so very much Xavier

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/5/2016 6:00:00 PM

That is quite the experience Chris! A special one for sure :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2016 9:47:00 AM

Thanks so very much my sweet friend. Your kindness is always a smile for me.