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I Finally Fell

I can't believe that i finally fell into a garden i once hated as hell will i forever dwell in this cute cell oh, she has gotten me into this spell. Just as the snail cannot shed its shell my heart is imprisoned in her courteous cell she's like a golden bucket in my wide well I've never seen her yet I hear her blessed bell I want to give her a ring she can't sell if she signs my poem with a pen, I won't rebel, I do wish she would not bid me farewel, because I want my name to be her lovely label Let the stars and skies help me tell her that I have been captured in her cell and my love for her is as hot as hell I didn't plan for this... I don't know how I fell

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Date: 8/8/2009 4:07:00 AM
nice one...thanku for ur comment...
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Date: 8/1/2009 12:23:00 PM
very interesting poem,Adeleke, good luck on this one. Moses
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Date: 7/24/2009 8:08:00 AM
Adeleke, this is a very lovely poem expressing ones love for that someone speial, the is an old song that came to mind "The love bug will hit ya if you don't watch out!" one never knows when love will strike but when it does...whew You know you've been hit, :-) this is an excellent write throughout. Thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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