Constance La France Poet Verse

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I Felt You

While drifting off to sleep this night,
I felt your gentle hand caress my soul;
And looking out my open window,
Your sweet soft light shone on me.
    As hazy clouds drifted by,
    In a black velvet sky;
    A perfect golden moon, 
Silent and comforted I lay my head down.
Your loveliness touches my very soul,
So I press your beauty to my heart;
                And I close my weary eyes.


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May 2, 2015


Poetry/Verse/I Felt You
Copyright Protected, ID 05-668-825-02
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Written for the contest, Its All About The Moon, 
sponsor, Skat, Judged 2015

Second Place

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Connie Marcum Wong June 10, 2015 at 5:23 PM This is so lovely Constance. Big kudos on your wonderful win! Aloha, Connie

Sandra Haight June 10, 2015 at 2:40 PM Beautiful as usual, Broken. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A June 10, 2015 at 12:47 AM Broken, thank you for drifting my mind. Love the poem. Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**

Laura Breidenthal May 24, 2015 at 4:20 AM Must have been a beautiful, magical experience. Love the photo you chose as well as the wording for this one. You seem to be a very versatile writer. These moments are priceless! Thanks for sharing these gems. I'm really enjoying reading your poetry tonight. Sorry I haven't visited more often! Always, Laura

Highwave Brian May 20, 2015 at 3:08 PM His creation reflects his glory! Love the way you presented the wonder of the moon.

Len Gasun May 4, 2015 at 10:09 AM You've penned a very lovely verse about the moon my dear friend, Constance. I like it so much and so with the photos aobve. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest. May I also have this chance to say thank you for your kind words in my blog. Have a blessed day! love lots and big hug, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux May 4, 2015 at 8:51 AM Beautiful! Love the picture as well.

Eileen Manassian May 4, 2015 at 7:54 AM This is lovely, Constance. I love the smooth flow of the words and the picture you have chosen. :) Good luck in the contest. I've also read your POTD about your day. It's lovely and deserved to be POTD. Seems like you have a wonderful day filled with lots of activities. Some of them I share with you! ;)

Thomas Martin May 3, 2015 at 12:40 PM Wow again!!!! Constance, you are a master (mistress) of these poetic forms! I do not use that term often, btw, and not idly! Admire the authenticity of your feelings and depth of thought with which you write so beautifully and originality. . . Tom

Thomas Martin May 3, 2015 at 12:30 PM Simply wonderful!!!!! Very touched!

Carolyn Devonshire May 3, 2015 at 12:01 PM Isn't it wonderful how much comfort we find in the moon's glow? As always, your poem is beautifully written and it gave me a peaceful feeling. Lovely! Carolyn

Nandita Das May 3, 2015 at 8:45 AM A very beautiful poem. Beauty in every line...#7

M. L. Kiser May 3, 2015 at 12:52 AM Very beautiful; best of luck in the contest.