'i Felt It Too'

I sometimes still picture you Laying there Not saying a word Just staring at me You said so much in that few minutes Not sure if you ever realised it You said things with your eyes We were both, Too scared to admit Neither of us uttered a word - Just the understanding of a love shared There is only one thing I would like to add to that night Just the words “Yep I feel it too” The chemistry The love Uncomplicated And yet it meant the world Our alone time will always be treasured, I know you're still with me Just not physically But I do feel your presence In the music The weird things and times That reminds me of you… Our time was short together, But we had the best of times Without a label being attached I still want you to know “Yep I felt it too”
Written by Wilma N. Neels Dedicated to a dear friend that passed away on my birthday on 25 December 2006 060920111445

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/27/2011 1:49:00 PM
* “I Beheld Your Lovely Name * Scrolled to A Poems Title I Could Touch * And Yes, I Felt Its Beauty Too * Ow, & How I Love Sweet Chocolate * Beautiful * Hugggs & Kisssses * Sarah.” *
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:41:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's contest. Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR
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Date: 9/10/2011 1:04:00 PM
Wow, I can feel what you felt, Wilma. Such a great writing. Many congrats :)
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Date: 9/10/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on your stellar win with this beautiful poem!!---Lori
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Date: 9/10/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:03:00 AM
Hi Wilma, a very sentimental poem, congratulation on your 1st place win. Take care, Cheryl
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Date: 9/10/2011 3:32:00 AM
Dear Wilma, I lost a very dear friend on Christmas of 2005 and can relate so well to the sentiments you expressed here, although we did say we "loved" each other as friends. Beautiful poem, dear. Congratuations on your first place in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2011 2:29:00 AM
hey Wilma, congrats on your brilliant win, i feel it too in this poem, did you get my email?..David
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Date: 9/9/2011 11:48:00 PM
This is powerful Wilma. Congratulations
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:53:00 PM
What a sad birthday. Congratulations on your no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:44:00 PM
Heartfelt, deeply felt, and it is so sad to read the postscript. Wow....
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:31:00 PM
CONGRATS WILMA ON FIRST PLACE WITH THIS EXPRESSIVE CREATION MY FRIEND.. AN HONOR TO SHARE FIRST WITH U LUV.. WORDS OF DEPTH AND DEFINITION LUV..
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Date: 9/9/2011 4:39:00 PM
This was such a heart moving write my love... I just left Linda a comment saying between the two yours I was so touched.. COngrats on your 1st place win in my contest.. Luv Michael
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:27:00 PM
wonderful words of devotion and emotion Wilma..beautifully written luv.. so u are a Christmas Baby ..oh wow.. a present to us ..luv..
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:33:00 AM
Wilma, I think losing someone on or very near a holiday invokes special memories. Having lost My Dad on New Years Eve and Brother on July 4th, Has made stronger memories for me. Wonderful write...God Bless...Taz. P.S You can call me Taz all you want...Everyone else does...The Original ....Taz
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:33:00 PM
wilma, i think this is that same person we discussed a long time ago? I really love how you did this poem. Very heartfelt. VERY good!
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:10:00 PM
oh so sorry about that Wilma. That never getw easier I don't think. As I'm getting older it seems that it hurts even more to lose a loved one... this is a reality write tenderly and thoughtfully written. What a day to enter eternal life on! That part is awesome
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Date: 9/6/2011 5:55:00 PM
Awww, what a sad but lovely piece, Wilma lfde
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:51:00 PM
misty-eyed by this sincere, flowing piece, wilms... wonderful ; i felt it too!... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:14:00 PM
this is so beautiful and bittersweet Wilma. Great job. So filled with sweet memories of long ago. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:34:00 AM
Very touching write Wilma...knocks at the heart's door...
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:30:00 AM
Oh shucks...what a very moving poem Wilma... I think I vaguely remember (forgive my poor memory) but I know you mentioned this to me before... such a beautiful write and I just love that part about "Yep, I felt it too" -- it may have just been a short time spent together but so well worth it--- hugs to you!
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:39:00 AM
A touching write, Wilma. To die on Christmas Day is a sad state of affairs in any case. The depth of your feelings come across powerfully in this fine write. xoxo Robert.
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