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I Fell In Love With Five At One Time

Someone perusing all the lines I penned before this century would surely say that I held sacred five iambic feet, that quatrains and rhymed couplets were my stay! It seemed my mind was programmed to create four lines per stanza, rhymed a-b-c-b. I saw that others wrote in varied styles and over time attempted to break free. I asked myself then, “Must you always rhyme?” Blank verse, I added to my repertoire. I crave the partial freedom it affords. While rhyming’s not included, meter is— those five iambic feet that won my heart! I challenged myself, “Write some free verse— not a nonet, a tanka, a cinquain, . . . but actual FREE VERSE; not a paragraph you chopped up and scattered down the page.” I’m workin’ on it! May 6, 2021 entered in the What's in a Title contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/8/2021 12:15:00 PM
It's a beautiful as well as technical poem. Congratulations
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/8/2021 12:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Christuraj. Janice
Date: 5/7/2021 3:46:00 PM
This website helps one to expand. It really helps to have so many examples of the forms you want to try. I enjoyed the playful wit in this piece Janice. A very clever take on the contest! Blessings xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/7/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. Janice
Date: 5/7/2021 7:25:00 AM
That's a lovely read... I enjoyed it... Good luck in the contest...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/7/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja. Janice
Date: 5/6/2021 5:35:00 PM
I find it nearly impossible to write free verse. Once I figured out how to write in meter, even my rhymes started turning up that way. I figure I can live with it. I admire you for stepping out of your comfort zone, Janice. Good luck:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/7/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny. I have read some great free verse over the years, but I simply cannot write it! Janice

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