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I Feel Like E,T,

i feel like E.T. the light is too bright i feel like Bruce Banner my rage has such might my spidey senses tingle constant fight or flight jumping to the jiggle of my peripheral sight i walk like E.T. around kryptonite ***

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Jack Ellison

Date: 3/15/2019 4:53:00 PM

You have spidey senses too!!! Mine don't tingle though, I UPCHUCK!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/16/2019 9:13:00 AM

Flight or puke response... That's unpleasant for everyone ;p giggles n' hugs galore <3

Kim Hyde

Date: 3/13/2019 8:09:00 AM

Thank you for this poem. I was inspired by the E.T. reference and wrote one called "Phone Home". I love that others' work can be a catalyst for my own.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/13/2019 8:49:00 AM

I love when that happens! Will check it out~ Thank you Kim! :) xomo

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/12/2019 1:33:00 AM

This was adorable...I think I'd walk like ET around "kryptonite", too.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/12/2019 7:56:00 AM

Giggles ;) ..."ouuuuuch"

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/10/2019 8:41:00 PM

The ending couplet is the thing, where your imagination took wing! Terrific poem, M.M! Best wishes, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/10/2019 9:15:00 PM

Thank you my friend :) xomo! <3

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2019 11:06:00 AM

Maureen, cute poem and very creative, well done ~

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/10/2019 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Dear :) xomo

Charles Messina

Date: 3/10/2019 8:32:00 AM

This is great, Mo. Thanks for the giggle...Happy Sunday :) xocm

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/10/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Charles! Hugs and Happy Sunday to you! :))) xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/9/2019 9:11:00 PM

It is a hilarious missive that made me smile as I have a poster of E.T. in my office at work, refusing to get rid of it because I love that movie so! "Your spidey senses" made me smile too. Spider Man movies so sweet in their non-hurting of people. It sounds like you had the same day I had yesterday.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/10/2019 8:13:00 AM

Giggles! A true E.T. lover will get the most out of this poem ;) picture me shuffling along, arms outstretched... "ouuuch" <3 Though the super hero PCS symtom I didn't get in to this poem (distracted by E.T.) was invisibility ...

Judy Ball

Date: 3/9/2019 3:21:00 PM

Hmmmm Cute little rhyme. Sounds like you need to cut back on the caffeine. I enjoyed this very much. It made me smile. God Bless, JB

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/9/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Judy! It's decaff after noon! ;) warm hugs, xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/9/2019 2:58:00 PM

Gotta love 'jumping to the jiggle' - you have such a bouncy imagination!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/9/2019 3:37:00 PM

Giggles! Thank you Michelle! I loved it too, mo poetic for vertigo & anxiety caused by eye movement issues from concussions ;) xomo <3

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/8/2019 9:32:00 PM

I would like to see what this super hero looks like!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/9/2019 11:04:00 AM

As pictured, minus the air, I done shaved it again, just past Velcro stage now ;)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/8/2019 6:18:00 PM

Enjoyed the write. So many things...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/9/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thank you Kim. Yes... ;) xomo <3

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/8/2019 12:45:00 PM

I like your interesting poem, great terms and wording, sublime muse indeed. E.t means ExtraTerrestial right? Nice to read from u again, plz do comment my newest poem too.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/9/2019 11:06:00 AM

Thank you for this, and that :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2019 12:06:00 PM

Haha nice one Maureen, don't forget to phone home. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/9/2019 11:07:00 AM

Giggles and hugs ;) xomo!