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I Fear That Pinocchio -

Confessed to creator Geppetto "Got a fetish, I think you should know Often I fiddle ‘Round with my middle Take a look-see how THAT baby grows!" Sumitted for: Roy Jerden's contest

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James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2014 4:23:00 PM

Quirky Limerick Tim, and wonderfully using Pinocchio as your character. Thank you for your lovely comments this evening, James :)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 8:41:00 PM

Too funny, Tim! congrats on a great win!.. I get the contest now.. must try it next time.. These are great!!. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:39:00 PM

Tim,, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2014 3:53:00 PM

AWesome. I had not seen all the limericks yet on the winners' list so it's fun to peruse them now. Roy got better ones than in his first contest. I am surprised by how the members came through this time for him!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/7/2014 11:53:00 AM

HAHAH oh Tim, you are so bad, funny stuff, grats on your win my friend :) :) hugs.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/7/2014 7:30:00 AM

Nice witty one Tim! Congrats on big win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/7/2014 6:00:00 AM

Outstanding piece, Tim. congrats on the win

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2014 6:00:00 PM

I wouldn't take any wooden nickels when you try to sell your poetry, Tim !! LOL !!! Congrats on this winner !

Jadazzle United

Date: 7/6/2014 5:18:00 PM

great Limerick. Well done on your win. Jan & Darren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2014 4:40:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations. hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/6/2014 4:22:00 PM

Hahaha what I like the Pinocchio one..:D

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/6/2014 3:49:00 PM

Congrad's on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2014 12:23:00 PM

Ahhh! Witty + original on Pinocchio theme...slightly audacious:) // paul

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/13/2014 6:22:00 PM

Often you fiddle with rhymes and a riddle, and sometimes they blow me away with the prose!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/11/2014 2:32:00 PM

Lordy, Lordy, aren't you Bawdy! Very funny poem, Tim. I'm sure this is just the type of limerick Roy is seeking! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2014 2:23:00 AM

Brilliant! good luck in the contest. Hugs jan x