I Fawed Down

You've seen the TV and been in the room

    Where they sell you a button to get you help soon

    Oh, I have even seen it in my dreams

     I don't have one there, though it seems

     I FAWED DOWN and GO BOOM!
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August 7, 2010 at 2:53 AM
Interesting Daniel, this brings a smile to mind.. The use the need of being controled like a Staple..is close to push any button, enjoyed your limerick, have a nice one,..LeeAnn
Taylor Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Great write, Dan. Nice job. I'm working on a "Duke" poem. I'd like to send my rough draft to you to see what you think. You may want to add or make a change. I'd like to send it to your Soup-Mail but I don't know how to do that. It's only 4 stanzas so far but it's a start! Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Great limerick, Daniel. We could all use a special button from time to time. Big smiles reading this. Am having a nice vacation. Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Cute limerick ~ I fawd down laughing ~
K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 10:16 AM
very cute, Dan! Enjoyed reading this one and your title's adorable as well ;) -- nikko :)
Neels Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Witty write Mr D... Wilma
Mehta Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 3:55 AM
Quite humorous and witty.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 1:02 PM
cute on!! witty!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:01 PM
HA HAHA ..this one is great Dan.. luv your play on words in the title.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is "Nymphette" .. went with the naked thing.. what else could a "Sweetheart" do? haha..with luv
Roberts Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 11:02 AM
really cute poem
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