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I Fawed Down

You've seen the TV and been in the room Where they sell you a button to get you help soon Oh, I have even seen it in my dreams I don't have one there, though it seems I FAWED DOWN and GO BOOM!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2010 2:53:00 AM

Interesting Daniel, this brings a smile to mind.. The use the need of being controled like a Staple..is close to push any button, enjoyed your limerick, have a nice one,..LeeAnn

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/25/2010 7:44:00 PM

Great write, Dan. Nice job. I'm working on a "Duke" poem. I'd like to send my rough draft to you to see what you think. You may want to add or make a change. I'd like to send it to your Soup-Mail but I don't know how to do that. It's only 4 stanzas so far but it's a start! Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2010 2:31:00 PM

Great limerick, Daniel. We could all use a special button from time to time. Big smiles reading this. Am having a nice vacation. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 7/25/2010 7:39:00 AM

Cute limerick ~ I fawd down laughing ~

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/23/2010 10:16:00 AM

very cute, Dan! Enjoyed reading this one and your title's adorable as well ;) -- nikko :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/23/2010 5:11:00 AM

Witty write Mr D... Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2010 3:55:00 AM

Quite humorous and witty.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/22/2010 1:02:00 PM

cute on!! witty!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/22/2010 12:01:00 PM

HA HAHA ..this one is great Dan.. luv your play on words in the title.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is "Nymphette" .. went with the naked thing.. what else could a "Sweetheart" do? haha..with luv

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/22/2010 11:02:00 AM

really cute poem