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I Dreament I Was a Butterfly, Or Was I Dreaming

I drement i was a butterfly or was I a butterfly dreaming I flew through a key hole into an enchanting garden. beauty surrounded me. taking me in with passion. Wet dew was on every rose little droplets from heaven. my wings then grew faster and faster untill I found myself on the ground human once again. As I lay and look up the trees are captivating. Its so facinating the way the branches flow interwind with eachother, never breaking unless forced. As I sit up the garden is like sipping a cup of tea warm and delightful. Its like being a child again so enrapturing. Well I take a walk beauty is everywhere. I look entracing my steps. I come back to the door, I touch the cold brass with my fingertips. Then I once again feel the tingle when I become aware again of my surroundings I am once again a butterfly, able to fly through the small hole. My life laying ahead because I am changed. Kayla Noel July 10 Daydreams and Dream Dreams

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Date: 7/10/2011 6:04:00 PM
Though the poem is imaginary, and full of wonderous imagery, I feel this poem has a real meaning to you that the reader does not understand; there's nothing wrong with that, for a good poem has mystery!.... I feel that you are a young woman spreading your wings in poetry. And I want to encourage you to keep writing.... Have you thought about nature, and all the grandeur and beauty that you could bring to the reader;... only the beauty Kayla; only the beauty. God Bless! Lawrence
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