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I Dream Poetry

Stay steady and silently still, Let me adore what your eyes do to my shivering quill, I am led astray between my walls and your words, Blinded by a cloud of these butterfly birds, The weight of my vocabulary seem to have lost it’s gravity, Relearning how to talk as I dream poetry, Shall I be an ornament, anonymous to your broken heart? As mine shifts in it’s grave hiding the pulverized parts, I can glaze my skin in all the sonnets and balladry, Let the sweetness of your tears drench me in melodious melancholy, I do not deny the searing sea you long to purge, Nor do I belong to the grief you submerge, I am simply a fire set by your golden rays, And we are but mere fools trying to outrun our own mazes.

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Shane Thacker

Date: 2/18/2024 7:47:00 AM

Your words have certainly not lost gravity here. Wonderfully written, Lioness.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2023 6:57:00 AM

A pleasure to read your poems this morning. Have a great day.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/29/2023 1:35:00 PM

This is amazing writing enjoyed every delectable phrase.

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/20/2023 3:01:00 AM

This is such a truly glorious poem Lioness. Such beauty held within poetic lines,’Blinded by a cloud of these butterfly birds’, I am simply a fire set by your golden rays’. You display a wonderful creative heart and talent. I look forward to reading more of your outstanding work. Hugs and smiles to you :):)

Sam Scott

Date: 9/13/2023 8:23:00 AM

What a superbly delightful piece of poetry this is: "The weight of my vocabulary seem to have lost it’s gravity" Love it :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/13/2023 1:39:00 AM

Congrats, wonderful words. Beautiful indeed. God bless you, Love, Gina

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/13/2023 1:48:00 AM

Awwn thank you soo much Gina ..I am so happy you enjoy this piece

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2023 12:49:00 PM

Dear Lioness, back with big congrats for your excellent win in Ink's contest with this rich and riveting poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/13/2023 1:50:00 AM

Awwwn thank you soo much susan.. it makes me soo happy that you liked my piece

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 4:23:00 AM

I absolutely love the rhymes and flow of this, i didnt even realize this poem was written by you, cus of how you’ve started the poem, its a bit different from your usual writes but as always you kept your metaphors and depth, melody of melancholy! Love the metaphors and that ending was so touching. Felt this. Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/13/2023 1:51:00 AM

Hahahha awwwn thank you Papi for choosing me … I thought I’d try somthng different for your prompt … I am soo happy that you have chosen my piece … thank you <3

Fading Star Silence

Date: 9/11/2023 11:03:00 AM

Wow! My fellow lover of cocoa and coffee, your deeply divine words makes my soul weep in its beauty and grace! You have always been one of my favorite poets to read and feel and it’s truly an honor to read this piece..true art, straight from your beautiful heart and soul! I’m always at a loss for words as I read and reread your poetry..your flow is so smooth, it is a true treat for the eyes!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 8:19:00 AM

Always with a coffee, my cocoa caffeinated sisterrrr! Hahaha! I can just see is now, reading, writing and causing havoc with coffee in tow! I’m so glad you’re here!!! And I always enjoy your deepest and brilliant masterpieces!! They take my breath away and make me feel and ponder!!

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/13/2023 1:53:00 AM

Aye aye ayeeeee my cocoa caffeinated sistaaaa…. It is soo nice to see yaaaaa … Hahahha thank you soo much for enjoying my piece .. I hope u enjoyed it with a cup of coffee aeeeee

Tom Woody

Date: 9/9/2023 6:08:00 AM

The title is in itself dreamy. "I am simply a fire set by your golden rays..." Great line lioness. Roar

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/13/2023 1:53:00 AM

Thank you soo much for enjoying my piece

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/8/2023 1:30:00 AM

"I'm simply a fire set by your golden rays" Wow, this is sooo breathtaking!!! And we are but mere fools trying to outrun our own mazes... Woah, I love your writing style, truly is so captivating and enriched with evocative emotions.. Brilliantly crafted dear lioness poetess.. Love this!!

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/13/2023 1:54:00 AM

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/7/2023 8:53:00 AM

Dear Lioness, my heart’s imagination is enthralled by your dramatic imagery and dynamic metaphor. Rich emotion flows from your “shivering quill” with eloquent finesse. Sprinklings of alliteration shine in your evocative verse. Welcome to poetry soup. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/7/2023 10:48:00 AM

Awwwn.. thank you soo much for your kind support… happy to be here