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I Dream Her Own Dream

And Mother shifts her face against cerulean breeze, tasting the lethargy among insolent gusts while she heaves quietly of the moment, renewing her senses through a warm elixir for lonely thoughts, delicately cleansing snarled reflections and disheveled pauses... faint wicker impairs kiln of hope as uncertain answers grow dim tasting slow breath flowing from her soul. I dreamed about her own dream restored, that she hears my silent words her own boney figure collapsing -- while dire aspiration weakens like vague heartbeats into nights benumbed and under panels of glass, I realize she has learned to pray with me in the rain. For Silent One : I Dreamed A Dream Contest 2/19/2019

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Date: 2/21/2019 11:25:00 AM
Gorgeous, Nette. I see why you won.
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Date: 2/21/2019 11:02:00 AM
Congrats Nette! i see this was a winning poem! such heartfelt angst, with relief ending...nice!
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Date: 2/21/2019 5:55:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Nette...Congratulations on your 1st place win...hugs Charlie :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:11:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2019 4:25:00 PM
A beautifully written poem Nette, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/20/2019 2:23:00 PM
A climax ending. The whole write was a denouement and then wham...a positive overcoming!
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Date: 2/20/2019 2:00:00 PM
This one is really deep and a great take on the contest, just loved that last stanza.. I have a different understanding about this poem, A mum who has sadly died and her daughter remembering her dreams... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/20/2019 11:30:00 AM
Ah, your poem speaks volumes of the heart of a daughter, one of your very best Nette, I particularly fell in love with your very last line, xo
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Date: 2/20/2019 8:59:00 AM
Hi Nette, a wonderful dedication poem for your mother. Living a memory in dream, how special a write from your pen. Mothers are always with us, ever guiding and showing love. Loved the content of this excellent poetic gem. have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/19/2019 8:39:00 PM
Oh this is beautiful! Quiet, hidden moment with your mother. Very soft, and tender! Thank You!
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Date: 2/19/2019 4:53:00 PM
Reads like beautiful music.
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Date: 2/19/2019 4:49:00 PM
Beautiful dedication nette and when they are no longer with us they are never really far from us. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 2/19/2019 3:20:00 PM
A wonderful tribute nette, highlighting a very special time in your life. Splendid entry for the contest. Thanks for your tender comments re my entry, "I Dream". I too saw the show on History Channel re the Philippines during WW11. My brother fought in the Leyte Gulf Battle & thankfully came thru WW11 without a scratch. Later on he fought in Okinawa & there won the Bronze Star. My hero!
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Date: 2/19/2019 2:04:00 PM
A special tribute to your beloved memory...and mother's dream. Well written, as always. Best for a win, Nette.
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Date: 2/19/2019 1:44:00 PM
- Lovely poem, Nette :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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