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I Don'T Even Know Her Name

red is the colour of her hair an unnatural red taken from a bottle and red is the colour of her flair where men stare and she graciously models her red is such a lovely thing it has a ring and even sings her red has it's own style unseen for miles not on the dial beneath the hair a stern beautiful face she's of her race and carries a polished grace some women look better with their glare forget the smile that appears just once in a while she stays just mostly to herself guarding her wealth her reverential status and though she is fixed with this aberration her sophistication i give my admiration

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Date: 1/16/2014 3:16:00 PM
Sounds like a model, John. They aren't always smiling but still beautiful and graceful. Thanks for the comment.:) Now I have to get my act together and finish the next part! Your poem flows nicely from the beginning to the end. Keep well, Mikki
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Date: 1/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
Sounds like Katherine Hepburn to my mind and imagination. Some call a sophisticated woman stuck up and other things, but I adore a sophisticated woman. There are plenty of red necks around. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver
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