Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

I Don'T Break Hearts For a Living

How I miss the way we kissed-
Our lips were locked and laced with bliss
So why did our Love end like this?
Never to be the way we had wished...

Of sorrowed Hearts, to lament and mourn,
Borrowed Hopes in Truth to burn
The Rose of Love is thick with thorns:
So when I'm pricked, so then I've learned

*Every Rose has It's Thorn Contest

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Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2014 at 5:34 PM HI CHAN, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda Just That Archaic Poet April 3, 2014 at 11:42 AM Thanks so much, hon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2014 at 1:29 AM Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, JTAP Just That Archaic Poet April 3, 2014 at 11:43 AM Many thanks as always, doc :)

Kelly Deschler March 31, 2014 at 5:25 PM I loved the depth of emotion in your words. The rhyming was wonderful, too! A really great poem, BP! Congratulations on your win! Just That Archaic Poet April 3, 2014 at 11:45 AM Thanks for hosting a great contest, SP, and thanks for the placement; I sincerely appreciate it, hon :)

Debbie Guzzi March 22, 2014 at 3:21 PM reading ... Light & Love

Skat A October 23, 2013 at 9:18 PM :) Congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT Just That Archaic Poet October 24, 2013 at 9:22 AM Thanks, Skat! :)

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2013 at 11:16 PM Just That Archaic, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 7:00 AM Thanks, Linda ;)

John Posey October 16, 2013 at 4:29 AM Written with a most talented pen... my heart feels more than my words can express.... Congratulations.... Jake Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 7:46 AM Thank you for the kind words, John; they warm my heart :)

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2013 at 6:31 PM I like this winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 7:47 AM Thank you, and much appreciated, Sara :)

Shanity Rain October 15, 2013 at 3:48 PM Absolute beauty , Great job ! congratulations ! Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 7:47 AM I sincerely appreciate it, Shanity; thank you! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta October 15, 2013 at 8:08 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, AP Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 7:48 AM Thanks as always, Doc! ;)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 15, 2013 at 7:03 AM Congrats on your placement! Such beauty and sadness...Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda Just That Archaic Poet October 15, 2013 at 7:22 AM Thanks, Rhonda; I appreciate it. Hope you have a great day as well, and much love to you! :)