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I Do Not Dare

I do not dare I do not dare to ask the question I think about you every day I want to wake up beside you I am afraid of what you might say I hold you gently in my dreams I wake up not wanting to leave I need to stop and move on I don’t know how I am not that strong I am heart broken afraid and sad I am worried I do not dare so unfair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/28/2017 2:16:00 PM
Oh ..this sweet poem makes me think of someone having a crush on a girl..yet to shy to approach her...Hope She dared ask him out..smiles.:)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/28/2017 3:03:00 PM
Oh when such things happen..it means it wasnt destined...but the memory remains sweet.:).
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/28/2017 2:31:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, this poem is about me when I was a shy young man , I found out years later that she had a big crush on me , I never told her , the one that got away:)))hugs ,,, maybe there is a parallel universe where we dare too
Date: 4/28/2017 2:47:00 AM
Afraid of taking the dare! a tacit thread we all either hold or break! Nicely done. Regards, Craig
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/28/2017 9:07:00 AM
Hi Craig, thanks for comment :))
Date: 4/27/2017 6:27:00 PM
If she loves you, I dare you, she'd wants you to dare. And come on power up and go get her :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/28/2017 9:16:00 AM
Hi Akkina, thanks for comment , I was very shy as a young man so I taught it would be a good idea to go back in time :)))) hugs , ps I never did ask and I found out years later that she was mad about me ,,, not to be :((
Date: 4/27/2017 6:01:00 PM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your heart and a peek at your soul. A sad and thought provoking piece worthy of a second look. Emile
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/27/2017 6:08:00 PM
Hi Emile , Thanks for your lovely comment :)) hugs from Ireland

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