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I Do

A blue bird chants a song. A beautiful, passionate song. Silent as a dove she waits. Counting down the dates until her love will find a beauty so divine. Her heart of gold And herself so bold. She can but only pray to see that single true man-to-be. Their love will forever last gone with each's past. As summer beats along she prepares her vow. To love as you allow. Their compassion so strong, with not a thing wrong. Nothing can compare, the deep love they will always share. As she walks down the aisle thinking it's all for you, just to love and say, "I do."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/8/2010 9:31:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations Ileana, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your absolutely beautiful poem, "I Do". It was a delightful romatic read. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/22/2009 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Ileana. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Ileana and best wishes on advancing to the final round. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Ileana! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:25:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:03:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Ileana. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:01:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Ileana >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:04:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:47:00 PM
Super write, a delight to read, and a warm welcome to the Soup to you Ileana, looking forward to reading your future works>>James
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