I Died a Little Inside

Such a terrible day 
when you died my love 
for I died a little inside
The day your life was swept away
in the surge of a massive landslide

Ten years have passed 
where have they gone
is often a question I ponder upon
I wondered how I would carry on
without you here to guide me through
without you here what would I do

I still shed tears when least expected
You are in my heart and soul each day
I know our souls are still connected
I pray you hear the things I say

There have been signs I feel you’re here
inside our home my darling dear
These I cherish I hold them close
deep within my heart
I draw upon them
when it feels my life will fall apart

My days alone feel bittersweet
and as the years go by
Each day I live without you
brings us closer to that time
when our souls will join forever 
as together they entwine

7th February 2019
Contest: I Died A Little Inside
Sponsor: Silent One
2nd place

Contest Brian's Choice N
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:52 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Ann :) - Have a lovely new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 12:53 AM
So many thanks for your congrats and hugs Anne-Lise! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gilmour Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Many thanks for my placement in your contest Silent One. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 10:33 AM
You always know how to put your raw feelings onto a page and turn my soul inside out. Nice one Ann. Good luck in the contest.
Gilmour Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 2:13 AM
Bless you dear Caren, it can be quite cathartic to pen these poems and in a strange way brings Frank closer to me. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Oh wow Ann. Beautiful tender rendering, I expect to see at the top of the winners list. Good luck! xomo
Gilmour Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 2:09 AM
Thank you so much Maureen for your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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