I Didn'T Answer, I Didn'T Need To

I didn’t answer, I didn’t need to How did this happen, amidst words, phrases, stones skipped on poetic ponds Not looking for or expecting a touch to the heart, a caress, yet it came I fell, head first into a joy, a blissful feeling I had not felt before You said the same, wishes made on coins tossed had finally come true Holding hands without touching, kissing over counted miles and borderlines of snow We sang together, harmonies, lyrics of love from our hearts, melodic compositions formed of dreams Picked flowers, daisies, tulips from the gardens of pure affection blooming all around us It seemed no walls, barriers could hold us back as we ran towards each other Then appeared a river, wide, raging A chasm of worry and fear was flowing across our paths Now a deluge of falling tears filling, overflowing it banks making footing uneasy, difficult And we sit on opposite sides staring at each other, reaching for something that seems so far out of reach Dark clouds roll in, threatening but we stay, standing on the muddy shores wondering what will become of us in this flooding “I can’t” you weep facing deep obstacles, a current too strong, pulling you in different directions A drenching downpour of emotions saturating your decisions with doubt as you wave goodbye “Wait” I shout, “I will swim to you!” But your eyes are too wet and your heart is a breaking levee Diving in anyway I am swept away, pulled under, unable to breathe, choking watching you fade as you turn away Hope is gone, fears have overshadowed desires drowning in what is lost, trapped in the rapids of disappointment When a hand grabs me, lifts me, saves me… I open my eyes on the other side to see, it is yours You cradle me in your arms and I breathe, the most wondrous breath When suddenly clouds part and the sun illumines your face as you whisper, “You truly do love me, don’t you?” I didn’t answer, I didn’t need to…you knew
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Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Wonderful write Chris, congrats on another POTD, almost every poem I read from you could be POTD! Loved the thrill of the adventure, and how true love always wins(well, at least in poetry and hollywood movies)
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July 11, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thank you John, that is such a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate your kindness my friend.
Callaghan Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Congrats on POTD. Very nice read, amazing description. -SC
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July 10, 2017 at 11:20 AM
Thanks so very much for your kind thoughts.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Vivid romantic imagery in this gorgeous poem, Chris. Kudos for POTD. Love always and forever.
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July 10, 2017 at 11:20 AM
Thanks so very much Freddie. I am happy you liked this one.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Wow I just watched a romantic movie through your artistic words! This is so deserving of being honored with POTD! Congratulations Chris! : )
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July 3, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Thank you Connie so very much for your kind thoughts. I was hoping you would like this one. I appreciate you and always look forward to your visits to my page.
Chircop Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 5:11 PM
You will always know that She loves you so ...Sigh. Such a beauty this is.. Had to log in and leave you a comment.
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June 30, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Someone pinch me, I must be dreaming. :) My sweet friend, it is so nice to see you here! Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and for bringing the biggest smile ever to my face. You are truly missed around here Charmaine. Thank you again for popping in to read my poem, I am so happy you did.
Sands Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations ! This is one of my favorites and so well deserved to be POTD! :)
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Thanks so much my friend. :)
Walker Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 10:50 AM
wow, beautifully written Chris !! Congrats on POTD, you definitely deserve it. Your broad spectrum of writing styles and creativity seem limitless !!! :)
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for always bringing a huge smile to my face. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Kinch  Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Absolutely perfect penmanship from you again Chris. This is definitely going in my favorites. Such a beautiful story of the ups and downs of love. So glad it ended happily. BIG CONGRATULATIONS on POTD.
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth for your kind and encouraging comments. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 12:41 AM
A beautiful love story, Chris:) congratulations on POTD:)
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
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June 28, 2017 at 10:58 PM
Such a wonderful story of true love...the fear of losing and the joy of having is described so touchingly. The flow is smooth. Relief and Hope at the end. Well done for POTD! :))
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June 29, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Thank you so very much Sunita for your kind thoughts. I appreciate your visit.
Mccall Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Another masterfully written piece Chris so beautiful and elegant worthy of poem of the day congratulations and well done.
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I am glad you liked this one.
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 2:23 PM
- What a glorious poem, Chris - Can anyone resist this wonderfully romantic poems ... not me :) - A lovely read - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 28, 2017 at 2:40 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise for all of your kind words you leave for me. Your comments always bring a sunshine smile to my face. :)
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June 28, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Hi Chris, It's so good to see you posting again. This poem is exceptional , romantic and well written. Congratulationson getting the poem of day. It was most definitely well deserved :-)Alexis
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June 28, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Hey there Alexis, I have missed you my friend. Thank you so very much for your kind words. I am happy you stopped by and enjoyed this one.
Ella Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:42 AM
This is a wonderful poem! A romantic journey that pulls at the heart <3 Congratulations Chris on the POTD :)
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June 28, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Sara, I am happy you liked this one. I an thrilled you stopped by today.
Williams Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:05 AM
A well deserved congratulations not only for the POTD my dear friend, but for turning out a masterful piece of romance that's filled with all the elements of indecision, yearning, possibility of losing and the heroic desperate act of self sacrificing love, culminating in that picture of warmth and affection - Love wins in the end... Maria
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Maria, your wonderful comments always touch my heart. I appreciate you my friend.
Smith Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Great pick for POTD...Congrats Chris
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Tim, I didn't expect them to pick this one.
May Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Diving into the promise of love...Congrats on POTD
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Thanks so very much Joseph.
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations Chris on POTD honors for this wonderful adventure:)
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate it.
Downing  Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Love is stronger than fear... Congratulations Chris, on your truly amazing POTD, so beautiful :)
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thank you Kina, I am happy you enjoyed this one and left such nice comments for me.
Smith Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Lovely, romantic adventure poem, congratulations for POTD honors...
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thanks so very much Charlie.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Back to heap congratulations...heap heap hooray! xomo ;)
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Thank you my friend, so much.
White Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 5:41 AM
PotD my friend. And I don't have much to say because you know how I feel about this subject.
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Darren, I know.
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 5:05 AM
Many congrats on POTD this is SO well deserving of the honour:-):-) hugs jan xx
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your kindness.
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 3:58 AM
You are the man, Chris! Congrats on POTD, my friend
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thanks so much Rick.
Wanter Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:07 PM
You ducked out a while, and then came back with a masterpiece. One of the best poetic stories of love and loss and love I've read. Of course, I fav'd it.
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Thanks so very much my friend for always making me smile with your comments. I am happy you found this one and enjoyed it so much. I appreciate you reading this long winded poem.
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