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I couldn't talk about it, so I wrote a poem

No Rush Hair brush through my hair, no rush. The wrinkles will not slow, but time slows on the satiny pillow, in throes. The bed softly creaks as our eyes speak. They do not stare as the fire sparks. Familiar lips brush tender flesh, kindling the oneness, the forever afterness. The rush of internal flames combust followed by serenity of tousled hair. No rush to run bristles through my locks.

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Date: 8/13/2024 7:27:00 AM
your poem is delightful ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 7/23/2024 11:05:00 AM
Ooo... so romantic and tender... wonderful images your writing provokes! Xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Crystol! xx
Date: 7/5/2024 11:18:00 AM
Relationships as seem through your eyes- very poignant and to the point, with a touch of romance, enjoyed reading
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2024 9:38:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 6/29/2024 8:43:00 AM
Wonderful writing.. rushing light, rushing promises.... love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2024 10:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gina! Keep writing! You are such a joy!

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