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I Confuse Love

I was riding in a bus on my way back home Watching the pouring rain outside my window, as my thoughts recognize this epitome this argument I had in an attempt to answer my confusions I confuse love to create some magic embodied in a situation we call “romantic” When in reality it’s simple, enduring and tragic Far less than being dramatic I saw love from those who are unloved Those who receive less but give more than what they have Society calls them stupid for they weep and starve when they’re the ones who justify the reality of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/17/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/17/2018 5:43:00 AM
Very warm and thought-provoking piece. delightful, Irma. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Irma Labastilla
Date: 1/18/2018 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Line Gauthier.:)

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