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I Complete Thee

you surface me, like pebbles on a beach- for when I am out of reach, you search and I am found... when light shows no sound, you express with no speech- when not around, your embrace...I beseech. you cover me, like dew drops on a rose- only our passion grows... for I am free, I cut down the willow tree, oh, the highs and lows - and I complete thee, a love nobody knows. July 19, 2017

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Date: 7/21/2017 8:31:00 PM
Such lovely rhythm Laura, congratulations...
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Date: 7/21/2017 8:15:00 AM
A lovely spirit-filled delight! Congrats, Luloo!
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Date: 7/21/2017 2:16:00 AM
....a love nobody knows. A swell and unique ending. A charming insight into a powerful bond between 'just the two of you'. And thanks for your kind comment on 'Love And Security'. Blessings.
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Date: 7/20/2017 11:44:00 PM
A love nobody knows. Bittersweet. Congrats on your win Laura.
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Date: 7/20/2017 5:02:00 PM
This is extraordinarily poignant and exquisitely sublime ... I enjoyed this thoroughly, Laura - you are such a talented writer! Congrats, my friend! :-)
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Date: 7/19/2017 2:30:00 PM
beautifully woven just like love, loo.. this is splendid..huggs
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Date: 7/19/2017 10:26:00 AM
Ah, but there is one who knows, two counting you. Your muse feels it:) Love the poem, Laura:)
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