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Form: Anacreontic verse


I lay and stare
you’re lying there
Constant commitment
Gave you my word
Gave me your heart
Pledge a guarantee
Promises anew
We’ll always be us
Cherished passion
Adoring fondness
My darling husband
Relish in your touch
Heartstrings attached
Play with my hair
Pure predilection
Held in high esteem
Ignite my flame
Burn me with your touch
Release my tension
Inclined respect
Admire touches
Wipe my tears
Sweet veneration
True love forever
Feelings of delight
Calm my fears
Smitten beauty
Sensual strength
Needing each other
My beloved


Anacreontic verse is an Ancient Greek lyrical form, consisting of 20- to 30-line poems with three to five syllables per line.

Checked Syllables at www.howmanysyllables.com
Total # of syllables:  133 syllables
Total # of words:  87


Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: May 5, 2016



Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/5/2016 3:13:00 PM
A beautifully sensual write, Laura. T.J
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/6/2016 12:37:00 PM
thank you TJ :)-luloo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
Laura, I enjoyed reading your beautifully written poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:33:00 AM
many thanks Madalyn :)-luloo (pretty name:)
Date: 5/5/2016 10:35:00 AM
My hope is that every word stays true for you, well done LuLoo...
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:32:00 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 5/5/2016 10:15:00 AM
Oh to be in love, a blessing indeed. Nicely written.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:32:00 AM
thank you DM :)-luloo