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I Cherish You

Form: Anacreontic verse I lay and stare you’re lying there Constant commitment Gave you my word Gave me your heart Pledge a guarantee Promises anew We’ll always be us Cherished passion Adoring fondness My darling husband Relish in your touch Heartstrings attached Play with my hair Pure predilection Held in high esteem Ignite my flame Burn me with your touch Release my tension Inclined respect Admire touches Wipe my tears Sweet veneration True love forever Feelings of delight Calm my fears Smitten beauty Sensual strength Needing each other My beloved Anacreontic verse is an Ancient Greek lyrical form, consisting of 20- to 30-line poems with three to five syllables per line. Checked Syllables at www.howmanysyllables.com Total # of syllables: 133 syllables Total # of words: 87 Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: May 5, 2016

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Date: 5/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
Laura, I enjoyed reading your beautifully written poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:33:00 AM
many thanks Madalyn :)-luloo (pretty name:)
Date: 5/5/2016 10:35:00 AM
My hope is that every word stays true for you, well done LuLoo...
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:32:00 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 5/5/2016 10:15:00 AM
Oh to be in love, a blessing indeed. Nicely written.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/5/2016 11:32:00 AM
thank you DM :)-luloo

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