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I Can'T Resist You

He was lying there naked Tempting me – I wanted him oh so much Finally I could take no more I grabbed him mercilessly Popped him in my mouth I’ve never been able to resist eating Jelly Babies! 16th March 2015
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Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:36 AM
Great write and an excellent share!!
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Thanks Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx
Bear Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 9:48 PM
I would rather have the hunk than the jelly babies.!!!! Richard by the way is not yet really going grey just fading a bit LOL Much love to you Edith
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Aww Mama Bear don't spoil my illusion lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Wow I just read Richards comment, I didn't realize he was sending you pictures too!
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Shhh Armand don't tell everyone my secret:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Great job on photoshop. You did a perfect job of putting a young face on a picture of my bawdy (Misspelling intended). When you say Jelly Babies are we back to discussing brewers droop again?
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:41 PM
lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:31 AM
At first I thought, where did you get the photo of me? On second glance I realized his hair was darker than mine*lol*!
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:35 AM
lol Richard ... but you do know I have a thing for men with greying hair lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Baumgarn Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 12:47 AM
I just read "I Can't Resist You" and stopped at the picture, thennnnnnnnnn slowly scrolled down. How fun, and how lewd. Truly enjoyable. Trouble is, that pic was me thirty years ago and no one ever writes a poem and posts a sexy Jessica Biel photo. Thanks for the contribution and keep writing, I love it.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 4:27 AM
Thanks Brian I do try and write with a twist at the end of the poem if I can:-) I especially love to try and write with humour:-) Hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Jelly Babies! They bring both sweet thoughts and a chuckle...what's not to love. Emile. #7
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Thanks Emile:-) Hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 4:50 AM
Good job you never used my photo- people would have got the jelly baby bit straight away! Fun verse, Jan. Viv x
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Thanks for the humourous comment Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 4:02 AM
LOL...Jan, I'll have what you're having!
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:19 AM
LOL Thanks Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx
Sathasivam Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Jelly babies always tempting. Naughty but love it. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:19 AM
Thanks Ravi:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:46 PM
ha! very funny and i agree with andrea, too!
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 2:13 AM
you guys have me so wrong I am not naughty! Hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:29 PM
LOL, very funny, glad you liked my photo by the way!
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 2:13 AM
Its the only one I have of you my friend - and the memories lol:-( Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:41 PM
so naughty naughty!! Talk about a six pack!!!
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 2:12 AM
LOl Hugs Jan - me naughty no way! hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Hmmmm candy, pleasure, love...yes, I see the correlation Jan. Lol! Mmmmm!
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:34 PM
LOl who can resist a bit of eye candy lol:-) Hugs jan xxx
Nunez Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:28 PM
LOL! Had to check for today's M.O.M. serving Jan. You never fail to amaze me, girl! Always a 7!
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:31 PM
lol Kim I do try to write with humour if I can:-) glad you enjoy it when I have an attack of the sillies which seems to be most days despite everything that is happening in my life at the moment. I am still waiting for the tears - it will be like Noah's ark when they eventually do happen lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Wow! Jan looks beautiful when she blushes:) Sorry...couldn't resist that; those jelly babies sure are tempting. Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Ha ha Ha I will have to bring a box over when we visit lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Laurie Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Phew Jan! There is a happy ending. You never cease to have me guessing - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:15 PM
LOL Lindsay I do like to have a twist at the end if I can - the picture was deceptive lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 3:33 PM
What are we going to do with you?...lol...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 4:00 PM
***blushes*** I cannot give an answer to that Tim! Hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Jan, great pic!!!! and well done poem, naughty girl, I mean about the jelly babies !!! and thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem, I write poems . . .
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Loved Jelly Babies ever since I was a kid - so does my hubby lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Leake Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 1:40 PM
Jan, Enjoyed this piece, go ahead enjoy yourself. Bess Wishes Kevin
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Lovely to see you back Kevin:-) thanks for dropping by with your comment:-) Hugs jan xx
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