I Can't Make You Feel It, Whatever It Is
I could hand you the bottle,
tip it slow, let the cheap red river
burn down your throat—
but I can't make you feel it.
I could drop you in a dim-lit room,
where the fan wobbles and the radio wheezes
some dead man's blues—
but I can't make you hear it.
I could carve the hunger into your ribs,
make you watch the world walk by
with full pockets and easy hands—
but I can't make you taste it.
I could lay down the cards,
deal the losses, stack the nights
like empty beer cans—
but I can't make you know it.
Copyright © James Mclain | Year Posted 2025
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